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hi guys just being really Valente here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired por twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i amor composição literária and i want to improve it thx :

amor is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

You can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let amor go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

amor is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
amor is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

amor is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
mais then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
amor finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes amor burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
amor is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe you don’t amor the one who loves you,
But even if your coração is full of hate
amor comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

amor can bring back life to those
Who have lost meaning and hope
So I belive amor is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

amor is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
amor is something you can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
amor is how you sooth
amor is calm but also wild,
música that makes you move

Peaceful is what amor is,
a flutter in the air
amor is sometimes peaceful
amor isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
amor never stops growing
we don’t know how big amor grows.


amor is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for leitura it
Elzybells posted over a year ago
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
blacke posted over a year ago
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
Elzybells posted over a year ago
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) lol
Elzybells posted over a year ago
Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
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countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . you have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD lol thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
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ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at composição literária them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
Elzybells posted over a year ago
twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like composição literária n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
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loverofedward said:
oi there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair or maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant por it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! lol thx tho
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