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What should I call it? Would you read it?

im composição literária a new story. its about a human girl who falls in amor with a vampire (yes, you may think of Twilight if that helps you mold an outline into your mind). the human's name im planning to be Deidre (dee-druh) Berkley and the vampire's im planning to be Damian (dont hav the last name yet). tho they may get changed because my mind is never settled XP.

how it starts off is Deidre goes to live with her father and older brother because her mother died. in the first scene she comes across a mysterious teenage boy and cant keep her mind off of him, even tho they never even spoke a word to each other. Deidre goes to school after that weekend and sees the boy, along with other whiter-than-sheets kids. none of them are nice to her except Damian's adopted brother Wesley who's half human, half vampire, and he developes an infatuation ;D. Deidre enjoys having Wesley as a FRIEND but he is persistent on making her his.
during the course of all this madness Damian, who once seemed to hate Deidre, talks to her. they become friends. he feels he has to speak to her, thats its only right, because of the special ability vampire's have to tell when they have found their other half.

i dont know if that sounded confusing or not....
what do you think an appropriate name for this story would be?

would you read it?
(maybe ill post the first chapter up once i finish it)
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i started thinking about it and it seems to me that the special ability that vampiros hav is just like the one that the werewolves/shape-shifters in the Twlight Saga hav, called "imprinting". huh....never thot of it that way.......
PonygirlCurtis7 posted over a year ago
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im thinking that maybe i should change Deidre's name to Esmeree (ez-mer-ay). i was going thro my drawings yesterday and found one of a girl who i had named Esmeree and i said "oh my gosh, i forgot about that name!" Esmeree Something. any suggestions on a last name??
PonygirlCurtis7 posted over a year ago
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Esmeree Fisher. That's my only guess.
Spicekitten posted over a year ago
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As for the title...can't think of anything at the moment. Sorry.
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BlondLionEzel said:
maybe "Fanged Love"
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posted over a year ago 
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lol, i like it. its creative. ill put it on the list
PonygirlCurtis7 posted over a year ago
alicia386 said:
Cursed to amor Another
Freedom to Love
To amor Another
Vamp Love
sobrenatural Heart
Broken
I'll think of some mais later. Sounds like a really good plot. Add some mais twist and turns so it doesn't sound like Twilight. If it turns into Twilight then no one will want to read it.
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ArtemisFlame said:
Sounds interesting as long as you keep away from the whole 'she's obsessed with him, can't-live-without-him' twilight stuff.


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