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Loryn's POV 

I had been in the hospital for a couple of hours that i knew of. I just remember waking up here in the hospital. I knew I was in Australia for the Solar Blue Surf contest but I didn't know why I was in the hospital but I shortly found out what happened when Bec walked into my room. 
oi Loryn. How are you feeling? Bec asked. 
Fine, I guess. I said shrugging my shoulder. 
I winced in pain. My shoulder was hurting, my ribs were hurting and then my ankle was hurting some but not to much. 
Bec, what happened? Why am I in here? I asked. 
Well, Loryn you were surfing and your pearled, fell forwards off of your board. She told me. 
Oh. I said. 
The doctors said that when you fell progressivo, para a frente that you put your arms out in front of you to catch yourself but ended up popping one of them out of socket, then you sprained your ankle and then when Jake was giving you CPR it broke some ribs. Bec told me. 
Wow. I've never done this much damage to myself before. I told her. 
Loryn, can I ask you a question? I don't want to offend you. Bec said. 
Yeah sure. I said. 
Have you ever surfed that big of waves before? Ec asked curiously. 
No, I haven't. I said looking down. 
It's okay. We can work on that. I just wanted to know. She said. 
How long have I been in the hospital? Do my parents know that I'm in here? I asked. 
Yes they do. And you have been in here 3 days. Bec told me. 
Wow. Three days! Why aren't they here? I asked. 
I dont know. They said something about, you can take care if yourself. Bec told me. 
Oh okay. I said. 
If you need anything, Loryn, just ask. Okay? Bec said. 
Don't worry. I will. I said. 
Gary stuck his head in the door of my room. 
Do you feel like company? Gary asked. 
Umm, yeah. I said trying to smooth my hair out. 
You look good, Loryn. Dont worry! Bec said. 
 I smiled at her. 
Loryn! How are you feeling? Lila asked as she walked through the door. 
I'm okay. I told them. 
It was somewhat awkward because we all didn't know each other well or they didn't know me well. 
What have y'all been up too? I asked. 
Just boring school. Don't worry your not missing much. Leo said. 
The tone of his voice indicated that he hated school. I just kind if chuckled at his remark. 
That's good, then. I said. 
Okay, let's, let Loryn get some rest. Gary said. 
Oh we brought you some flowers. Cam said while setting them down on a table. 
Awe, thanks. They are lovely. I said. 
And we brought you some magazines!! Emma said while Paige handed them to me. 
Thanks yall. I said. 
What does y'all mean? Leo asked with a weird look on his face. 
Sorry, its a southern word for saying you guys or just sometimes talking to one person. Sorry it's kinda hard to explain. I said. 
It's okay. Well go início and research it. Paige said. 
Okay, we have got to get going! Bec said. 
Everyone said goodbye and Leo told me goodbye y'all even though it wasn't in the right context. 
Jake didn't say goodbye to me he just quietly slipped out of the room. 
Bec, is Jake okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I think so. Why? She asked 
I don't know, just wondering. I said. 
Okay, get some rest. I'll see you tomorrow. Bec said. 
Bye. 
I laid there thinking about so many things. How my parents weren't here on my first major wreck off my surfboard and then how Jake didn't talk to me at all. 
I kept making excuses up for why my parents weren't here. Like they don't have enough money for trips out to Australia or they can't just get up and leave their jobs. All while I was thinking that Jake kept popping up into my head. I had all these perguntas like; why didn't he say anything to me? Or why did he have that look in his eyes? Did I really die and did  Jake really bring me back to life? And then there was did my death and then did my coming back mess with Jakes mind? 
I fell asleep pondering  all of those questions. 


The seguinte morning I woke up really early. I was getting out of the hospital. The doctors gave me crutches to use until I could put weight onto my ankle without it hurting. I thought Bec was coming to pick me up but Jake walked into my room. 
Hey, Bec and Gary got tied up in a meeting so they sent me to pick you up. Jake said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Here are some clothes to change into. He said. 
Are you okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I guess. He responded. 
No your not. I can see it in your eyes. I told him. 
I'm fine. I don't know what your talking about. He said. 
Sorry, I usually can tell when people are upset. I said. 
I'll leave so you can change. He said. 
Something was wrong with him and I was going to find out but first I just had to find a way. I thought.  
I changed clothes and told Jake he could come back in. A nurse walked in pushing a wheelchair. She helped me get in it and then pushed me to the van. Jake had grabbed my back and my crutches. 
I can hold my stuff, so you don't have to carry it. I told Jake. 
It's fine. I've got it. He said. 
When we got to the furgão, van he opened my door for me and helped me get in and then he sat my stuff in the back of the van. 
So where is everyone else? I asked Jake. 
They are at school. He said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Lila, Paige and Emma wanted me to tell you that they are going to share a room so you can get the rest you need. Jake told me. 
Oh. I said. 
When we got to the house Jake grabbed my back out of the back and then handed me my crutches. 
Thanks. I said. 
He was treating me different, like he didn't care about me. It was different than before. I got inside and Jake was walking downstairs in his swimsuit. 
Do you need anything? Jake asked. 
No, I'm fine. I said. 
Okay I'm going surfing. He said and left. 
I hobbled up the stairs and went to my lonely room. There weren't any posters on the walls and my stuff was still pretty much in my suitcase. I went to the other girls bedroom and looked in on it. They had it so cutely decorated. I hopped back to my room and looked at the time it was 1:00pm. So I had a couple of hours before everyone would be home. Jake was pretty much ignoring me, my parents hadn't called me to see how I was and it was all starting to get to me. I could feel the tears filling up in my eyes. I didn't want them to escape but they started rolling down my face and I couldn't help it. I pulled my escrivaninha, mesa chair up seguinte to the window and sat there with my leg propped up on my bed. I could see Jake surfing from my room. I saw a bunch of other kids surfing too. They were trying aerials and they didn't have on a leash. I saw one kids board fly up into the air and land on Jakes head. I got up and ran towards the de praia, praia as fast as I could which wasn't fast at all. When I got to the edge of the water Jake was paddling in. 
Are you okay? I asked 
Yeah, I think so. He said. 
How did you get down here so fast? He asked.I was looking out the window and saw what happened. I was worried that you were hurt. I said. 
I was putting all of my weight into my leg that wasn't hurting and I was trying tj slow my breathing down but my ribs were killing me. 
So you are okay? I asked 
Yeah. He said. 
Okay, well I'm going back up then. I said. 
Okay. He said. 
I couldnt believe that he hadn't offered to help me back up to the house. It took me forever to get back up to the house por myself and when I got back, I sat in the same chair And propped my leg up on my he'd like before. 
Now I was crying out of pain. I had really hurt my ankle when I jumped up and ran down to the de praia, praia and then my ribs were hurting from running. I tried taking deep slow breathes but it wasn't working. I moved over to my cama and laid down to see if that help and it did some. 
When my breathing slowed down, I got up and went to the cozinha to get some ice for my ankle and ribs. 
When I walked into the kitchen, Jake was just sitting at the mesa, tabela looking down. I saw a tear drop onto the table. 
Jake-I said but I couldn't finish because he got up and let the room. 
Me being the kind of person who cares about how people feel, followed Jake. 
He stopped walking once he heard that I was following him. 
What do you want? He snapped at me while turning around to look at me. 
I just wanted to know why you were crying. I said. 
Go away and stop trying to pry into my life so much. He said. 
I'm sorry. I whispered. 
With all that said I turned around and walked back to the cozinha and grabbed some ice and headed for my room. 

Thanks anynomous for making me write again!!!! Please comment and/or like my story so I know who is all reading!!! Thanks!
posted by surfergal
I found Jasper and he ask me why I was so nervous I told him that a boy just walks through the house without even knocking.
He said oh that's Jacob he umm is umm talk to Alice about it please...
Okay I said.
So I went and found Alice sitting on the sofá watching Nessie and this stranger play with her. I went and sat por Alice and wispered in her ear asking who was this boy. She told me that this is Jacob Black and that's when he looked over and I finally figured out where I saw him it was at the o jantar, lanchonete back when I was in the coast guard. He
said nice to meet you again Addi. I said you too. Alice...
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Addi’s POV

Me and Renesme were having fun at scrabble she was so smart it was amazing. Luckily Edward and Bella walked through the door and that ended our game. Although Renesme said "she wasn't going to let me forget that she beat me at scrabble". Bella told me that "Esme and Carlisle would like to see me at the house", so I told "Renesme that I would be back later to play with her some more".

When I reached the house Carlisle and Esme were waiting for me in the living I was scared that they were going to tell me that something was
wrong or that I was going to have to leave. Carlisle started...
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When I walked in the room Edward asked “if I would like to have a piano lesson”?
I said “I would amor too”.
We walked over to the piano and we sat down on the bench and he pulled out canhão in D Major I was so happy I loved this song. We sat at the piano for nearly an hora and por that time I was playing the first 4 measures. I was so excited!
I told him “thanks”.
We will go over mais tomorrow. Edward told me. Emmet was making fun if me because as I got up off the bench I stretched my back and hurt my ribs.
I ask “Emmet why every time I do something”?
“because you make everything...
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Later that evening one of there sons and daughters dropped por my room to meet me. They introduce themselves as Jasper Hale and Alice Cullen. They were so cute they held hands I quickly new that the loved each other and I didn't think that was weird cause they weren't related.

The seguinte morning well it was mais like the afternoon but when I woke up Jordan and Max were in the room. I was happy to see them cause I
missed them. I told them that I was getting to stay with the Cullen’s for a little bit they seemed pretty happy too.

They had to leave pretty soon cause they had a curfew during the...
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Addi’s POV

When I woke up I didn't know where I was I started to freak out. But then I saw the doctor so I calm down. He told me his name was Dr.
Cullen and that I was in the hospital and if u remembered anything.
I told him “that I remembered Sergeant raio, ray kicking and punching me”.
I ask if “Jordan or Max were okay”?
He said that “they were not hurt in any way”.
I was happy to hear that.
I then ask “what happen to Sergeant Ray”?
He told me that “he is in jail”.
I was majorly happy about that because Sergeant raio, ray seemed like a pervert. He was creepy.
He also said “that I...
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Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant raio, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant raio, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant raio, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the escrivaninha, mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulância arrived I was happy because I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant raio, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to leave.
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When we were done treading water it was about 5 am and we got to dry off and go eat breakfast I think everyone was hungry. We went to class
afterward for what it seemed like forever but we watched a few vídeos and answered some perguntas so of wasn't that bad. Then we all went
for a jog. It was so cold outside that you could see your breath. We had ran about 2 miles when I started to have trouble breathing. I was
like great. So I fell behind some of the others and Senior Chief was pulling up the so I fell back behind him a little bit.
He asked “if I was okay” he said “that he could hear...
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When I got to the hospital I gave them all of my information but I didn't tell them that I was in the coast guard cause I new that they
would call Senior Chief and tell him that I'm in the hospital and that would lead to being kicked out. So I got x-rays and they told me nothing serious happened that it was just cracked so they could bandage my ribs up tight to keep it from hurting as bad.


When I got back to the base it was time to get up so we got in cama atuação like we had been asleep for a couple of hours. That was the hardest dia ever we had to swim do sit-ups and run. I'm not suppose to...
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As the weeks went on one Sergeant didn't like me I could tell he was always making me work harder. His name was Sergeant Ray. He was weird.
Me and Max formed a brother sister kind of relation ship through the weeks and I told him about the way Sergeant raio, ray was toward me.
Max said “that be wouldn’t let him harm me in any way”.
That night Senior Chief Randal came and woke us up around 3 am to teach us about hypothermia. We had to get in a cold pool full of ice in none other 5 degree weather. In 15 minutos we felt the full effect of it. I could barely walk. Once we got out Sergeant raio, ray wanted...
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I had to wake up at 3:30 in the morning just to get to the airport on time. When I was leaving I had a duffel bag and that's it, I got a couple of stares as I walked por people and then some people said thank you and of course I had to be blond and ask why they said thank you. They quickly responded por saying I thought you were in the military. I said I'm joining the Coast Guard and that's when they would say you are still keeping our Country safe. After that I didn't say anything I just smiled politely.

Soon it was time for me to bored my plane. I was being trained in Washington State, of all...
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