SurferGal's Fanfiction Club
cadastrar-se
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
Loryn's POV 

I had been in the hospital for a couple of hours that i knew of. I just remember waking up here in the hospital. I knew I was in Australia for the Solar Blue Surf contest but I didn't know why I was in the hospital but I shortly found out what happened when Bec walked into my room. 
oi Loryn. How are you feeling? Bec asked. 
Fine, I guess. I said shrugging my shoulder. 
I winced in pain. My shoulder was hurting, my ribs were hurting and then my ankle was hurting some but not to much. 
Bec, what happened? Why am I in here? I asked. 
Well, Loryn you were surfing and your pearled, fell forwards off of your board. She told me. 
Oh. I said. 
The doctors said that when you fell progressivo, para a frente that you put your arms out in front of you to catch yourself but ended up popping one of them out of socket, then you sprained your ankle and then when Jake was giving you CPR it broke some ribs. Bec told me. 
Wow. I've never done this much damage to myself before. I told her. 
Loryn, can I ask you a question? I don't want to offend you. Bec said. 
Yeah sure. I said. 
Have you ever surfed that big of waves before? Ec asked curiously. 
No, I haven't. I said looking down. 
It's okay. We can work on that. I just wanted to know. She said. 
How long have I been in the hospital? Do my parents know that I'm in here? I asked. 
Yes they do. And you have been in here 3 days. Bec told me. 
Wow. Three days! Why aren't they here? I asked. 
I dont know. They said something about, you can take care if yourself. Bec told me. 
Oh okay. I said. 
If you need anything, Loryn, just ask. Okay? Bec said. 
Don't worry. I will. I said. 
Gary stuck his head in the door of my room. 
Do you feel like company? Gary asked. 
Umm, yeah. I said trying to smooth my hair out. 
You look good, Loryn. Dont worry! Bec said. 
 I smiled at her. 
Loryn! How are you feeling? Lila asked as she walked through the door. 
I'm okay. I told them. 
It was somewhat awkward because we all didn't know each other well or they didn't know me well. 
What have y'all been up too? I asked. 
Just boring school. Don't worry your not missing much. Leo said. 
The tone of his voice indicated that he hated school. I just kind if chuckled at his remark. 
That's good, then. I said. 
Okay, let's, let Loryn get some rest. Gary said. 
Oh we brought you some flowers. Cam said while setting them down on a table. 
Awe, thanks. They are lovely. I said. 
And we brought you some magazines!! Emma said while Paige handed them to me. 
Thanks yall. I said. 
What does y'all mean? Leo asked with a weird look on his face. 
Sorry, its a southern word for saying you guys or just sometimes talking to one person. Sorry it's kinda hard to explain. I said. 
It's okay. Well go início and research it. Paige said. 
Okay, we have got to get going! Bec said. 
Everyone said goodbye and Leo told me goodbye y'all even though it wasn't in the right context. 
Jake didn't say goodbye to me he just quietly slipped out of the room. 
Bec, is Jake okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I think so. Why? She asked 
I don't know, just wondering. I said. 
Okay, get some rest. I'll see you tomorrow. Bec said. 
Bye. 
I laid there thinking about so many things. How my parents weren't here on my first major wreck off my surfboard and then how Jake didn't talk to me at all. 
I kept making excuses up for why my parents weren't here. Like they don't have enough money for trips out to Australia or they can't just get up and leave their jobs. All while I was thinking that Jake kept popping up into my head. I had all these perguntas like; why didn't he say anything to me? Or why did he have that look in his eyes? Did I really die and did  Jake really bring me back to life? And then there was did my death and then did my coming back mess with Jakes mind? 
I fell asleep pondering  all of those questions. 


The seguinte morning I woke up really early. I was getting out of the hospital. The doctors gave me crutches to use until I could put weight onto my ankle without it hurting. I thought Bec was coming to pick me up but Jake walked into my room. 
Hey, Bec and Gary got tied up in a meeting so they sent me to pick you up. Jake said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Here are some clothes to change into. He said. 
Are you okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I guess. He responded. 
No your not. I can see it in your eyes. I told him. 
I'm fine. I don't know what your talking about. He said. 
Sorry, I usually can tell when people are upset. I said. 
I'll leave so you can change. He said. 
Something was wrong with him and I was going to find out but first I just had to find a way. I thought.  
I changed clothes and told Jake he could come back in. A nurse walked in pushing a wheelchair. She helped me get in it and then pushed me to the van. Jake had grabbed my back and my crutches. 
I can hold my stuff, so you don't have to carry it. I told Jake. 
It's fine. I've got it. He said. 
When we got to the furgão, van he opened my door for me and helped me get in and then he sat my stuff in the back of the van. 
So where is everyone else? I asked Jake. 
They are at school. He said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Lila, Paige and Emma wanted me to tell you that they are going to share a room so you can get the rest you need. Jake told me. 
Oh. I said. 
When we got to the house Jake grabbed my back out of the back and then handed me my crutches. 
Thanks. I said. 
He was treating me different, like he didn't care about me. It was different than before. I got inside and Jake was walking downstairs in his swimsuit. 
Do you need anything? Jake asked. 
No, I'm fine. I said. 
Okay I'm going surfing. He said and left. 
I hobbled up the stairs and went to my lonely room. There weren't any posters on the walls and my stuff was still pretty much in my suitcase. I went to the other girls bedroom and looked in on it. They had it so cutely decorated. I hopped back to my room and looked at the time it was 1:00pm. So I had a couple of hours before everyone would be home. Jake was pretty much ignoring me, my parents hadn't called me to see how I was and it was all starting to get to me. I could feel the tears filling up in my eyes. I didn't want them to escape but they started rolling down my face and I couldn't help it. I pulled my escrivaninha, mesa chair up seguinte to the window and sat there with my leg propped up on my bed. I could see Jake surfing from my room. I saw a bunch of other kids surfing too. They were trying aerials and they didn't have on a leash. I saw one kids board fly up into the air and land on Jakes head. I got up and ran towards the de praia, praia as fast as I could which wasn't fast at all. When I got to the edge of the water Jake was paddling in. 
Are you okay? I asked 
Yeah, I think so. He said. 
How did you get down here so fast? He asked.I was looking out the window and saw what happened. I was worried that you were hurt. I said. 
I was putting all of my weight into my leg that wasn't hurting and I was trying tj slow my breathing down but my ribs were killing me. 
So you are okay? I asked 
Yeah. He said. 
Okay, well I'm going back up then. I said. 
Okay. He said. 
I couldnt believe that he hadn't offered to help me back up to the house. It took me forever to get back up to the house por myself and when I got back, I sat in the same chair And propped my leg up on my he'd like before. 
Now I was crying out of pain. I had really hurt my ankle when I jumped up and ran down to the de praia, praia and then my ribs were hurting from running. I tried taking deep slow breathes but it wasn't working. I moved over to my cama and laid down to see if that help and it did some. 
When my breathing slowed down, I got up and went to the cozinha to get some ice for my ankle and ribs. 
When I walked into the kitchen, Jake was just sitting at the mesa, tabela looking down. I saw a tear drop onto the table. 
Jake-I said but I couldn't finish because he got up and let the room. 
Me being the kind of person who cares about how people feel, followed Jake. 
He stopped walking once he heard that I was following him. 
What do you want? He snapped at me while turning around to look at me. 
I just wanted to know why you were crying. I said. 
Go away and stop trying to pry into my life so much. He said. 
I'm sorry. I whispered. 
With all that said I turned around and walked back to the cozinha and grabbed some ice and headed for my room. 

Thanks anynomous for making me write again!!!! Please comment and/or like my story so I know who is all reading!!! Thanks!
posted by surfergal
I was in the hospital for five mais days before I got to go home. Alice and Jasper drove me início from the hospital and Nathen was already at início cleaning my room up for me. I was so sore from hitting the coral. I still hadn't remembered anything from my past at all. It was hard not to remember my family or my past. I walked into the house and I thought I would start to remember things but I was wrong nothing came back to me.
Whats wrong Addi? Jasper said
I thought I would start remembering things once I got back here but I was wrong. I told him.
Your memory will come back, I promise. Jasper...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Once we got off of the plane we got into a car and drove to a small airport. I don't even know if it would be classified as an airport. I saw the plane that we would be flying in. It was a small plane, although it was bobbing up and down I couldn't quite figure it out. I turned toward Nathen and I was about to ask why but he seemed to know my pergunta already.
It's a float plane, Addi don't be scared. Nathen told me.
Oh, okay. I said looking up at him smiling.
Nathen leaned down to kiss me and then we started for the plane. We met our pilot and his name was Chritstophere. Okay so maybe now...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Once me and Nathen danced Emmet came over bad ask Nathen if he could dance with his little sister. So me and emmet danced he was very good at it too and the Carlisle came and danced with me.
Carlisle, I want to thanks you for everything you have done for me. You are like my dad, to me I continued saying. You have taken care of me when I didn't have a plAce to stay you understood what was happening when I was in the coast guard and I just want to tell you how much that means to me. I said crying.
Oh, Addi. Your welcome. Congradulation and I amor you. Carlisle told me.
Love you too. I said.
Once...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Nathen's POV

I was glad Addi was finally healing. I knew when she could surf she was fully healed. When she was surfing you knew that nothing was bothering her or she was just careless about everything. I don't mean it in a bad way or anything but she is so natural in the water, its like thats what she is ment to be around. I know Addi loved all of us but when she was surfing she fogot all about her troubles. She was amazing and I couldn't believe that I was getting married to her. A beautiful, loveable, sweet caring girl and she was all mine. It was 3 weeks till our wedding I couldn't wait....
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Nathen's POV

Once Carlisle called Alice and told us about Addi being in a wreck, were all getting in cars and heading to the hospital. I was so worried about her. Carlisle hadn't gave us any detail about how bad she was, but I figured sinse he called and told us I thought it was going to be bad. Once we got to the hospital and Carlisle got her stable he came out and spoke to us. He said that she was in a coma and that he didn't know when she would wake up and she was doing good right now.
Once Addi finally woke up I went in to see her. I knew she was fine but seeing her all helpless just made...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
I wasn't hurt to bad. I had 9 stitches in my head a couple of bruised ribs one broken rib a broken hand and let's not forget my memory loss. I was moved from the Intensive Care Unit to my own room within three days. Nathen stayed with me everynight I told him to go início and get some sleep but he refused to leave me. Once I had finally been able to sleep I woke up 3 hours later it was really late into the night and I just watched Nathen sleeping and thought how lucky I was to have such a great family and a great fiancé. I started crying when just thinking about it. Over the past months life...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Alice had me doing wedding plans everyday. It was amazing how much energy she had for such a small vampire. Alice and I planed Nathen and I's wedding within a month.
School went on 5 days a week as it usually did. I was a junior this year. Edward was helping me so much with my school and then I knew that I was going to go back into the coast guard once I actually turned 18.
So it was winter and it was snowing. This time last year, I had was just getting into the coast guard. It was weird how a ano had already passed and I was now part of a family.
One dia I was driving to school, usually Nathen...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
That night Nathen and I had made plans to go to the de praia, praia that mroning before making the drive back up to forks. Once I woke up I put on my bathingsuit and then I took off my ring so I wouldn't loose it. It finally hit me I was actually engage. We drove to the de praia, praia and we got there and started surfing immediately. We surfed for about two hours and then we had to make a tough desion on having to leave and go back to the hotel. Once we got back we went upstairs and took showers and then we finished getting ready and sent all of our stuff down to the car. It was a long drive back to the house...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Before I could say anything Nathen spoke up first.
Addi, I amor you with all my coração amd I want to be with you for forever. Nathen said.
I started crying when he was speaking.
I know you don't want to get married this young but please, Will you mary me later in life? He ask.
I couldn't even say yes I was so happy, so I nodded my head. He slid the ring on my finger and then he gave me a big hug, you know the kind where they sweep you off your feet. It was perfect, I had my family with me and I had a fiance. The family went back to the hotel and me and Nathen stayed out on the de praia, praia for awhile....
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Samantha 5

When I woke up that morning, the sun was just begining to come up. Oakley walked into my room right as I was getting out of bed. 
Good your up! Let's to surfing. Oakley told me. 
Cool. Be done in a minute. I said. 
Okay. He said and closed my door. 
I put on my bathsuit then my rashguard and I pulled on anpair of bluejean shorts. I walked down stairs and Oakley was setting eggs and biscuts in the table. 
How long have you been up?  I ask. 
45 minutes. He said. 
Oh. I went to the cabnit and pulled out a couple of water bottles tofill up with water and them I put them in the freezer...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
oi Guys,
Thanks for leitura my story. I'm sorry haven't posted anything in a while. I was fixing to publicar the 5 chapter when I accidentally deleted the whole chapter! I had a lot writen and I'm pretty much mad at myself right now. So I'm sorry but there probably wont be another Samantha story till Sunday. Again I'm sorry for the delay!!
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.

.
.
.
.
.
.

.
.
.

.
.
.
.
.
.
sorry
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
..
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.

.
.

.
.
..

.
.

.

.

.
.
.
posted by surfergal
The seguinte morning I woke up and still had no clue to where I was at. I opened the curtains and saw the de praia, praia and palm trees and expensive cars driving by. I figured we were in California. I woke Nathen up por letting all the sunlight in the room even though it was cloudy.
Sorry. I told him.
It's ok. He said. Happy dia after your birthday!
Thank you. I said.
Me and Nathen always slept with each other but all we did was sleep never anything else. We both knew until we were married we wouldn't do anything. We walked into the living room witch joined all the rooms together. Everyone was in the livingroom....
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
Sorry its so short! Comment and rate PLEASE!!!


I felt bad for leaving without one word to Nathen, but I knew I couldn't leave without one word so I said;
Look, I'm sorry I made you mad, but... I couldn't even finish my sentence.
No, I shouldn't have gotten so mad it was stupid of me anyways to know if you cared where I lived. Nathen said.
Its ok. I said with a yawn.
I think someone needs to go to bed. Nathen said with his oh so perfect grin that I loved.
Nathen carried me up to my room, like he usually did. I fell asleep against his warm chest. It was great to know that me and Nathen had made up. I didn't like to be mad at anyone. It is hard sometimes for me to forgive people but its usually not that long till I do forgive them.
I told Nathen goodnight and that I loved him and he said the same back to me
posted by surfergal
That night me and Nathen talked all night, and not once did it cruz my mind again that Nathen from what I understood had imprinted on me. It did cruz my mind that Nathen never told me where he lived in La Push. It was sorta weird at first but then I totally thought about how he was always coming here, never had to be anywhere, he didn't have anywhere to live.
Once I finally thought about it I had to ask him if I was right but I didn't know how to come about it. I didn't want to be all weird or acuse him of something he wasn't. So I went to Carlisle, or I had that planned. That morning I had...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
When I woke up, Nathen was still por my side except this time his head was lying back on the chair. Everyone was still in the same posistion as they were when I woke up the last time except Edward and Bella were there. I was thinking to myself, I wonder if Nathen has even left and Then I looked at Edward and he shook his head no. Poor thing he must be exuasted everyone must be. This is what I was saying before how everyone had to worry about me. I was sad that this happened to me but I was glad that no one else would have to go through it, I mean like I could take the pain but someone else might...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
When I woke up I was lying in a hospital. Alice and jasper were sitting on a loveseat holding hands and Emmet was sitting in a chair and Rose was sitting in his lap and Esme was standing por the window with Carlisle. Nathen was sitting in a chair right beside my cama holding my hand with his head down like he was asleep. Everyone looked ceia worried and then all of the sudden everything hit at once all the flashbacks of what happen a coue if days ago. Carlisle came over to my cama and ask;
Hey Addi, everything is gonna be okay. He said.
It feels like a truck hit me in my side. I told him.
Do...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
That morning I woke up and Nathen had left me a note saying:

Dear Addi,
Jacob is making us do some patrols. I'll meet you at school.
Love,
Nathen.
I thought it was so sweet. I looked over at my clock and it said that it was 7 oclcok. I was running late again. I found some clothes and then pulled my hair into a ponytail, knowing that it would have to come done when I put on my helmet. I put on some mascarra and then headed downstairs to get something to drink. Edward had me a glass of sweet chá on the counter when I walked into the kitchen. Once I told everyone bye I walked into the garagem and...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
I got back to the house 6 hours later. I hugged everyone and told them sorry for freaking out. They all said it was okay and that it happens. I went outside to call Nathens cellphone and he didn't answer. I left him a voicemail saying:

Hey, Its Addi.
I'm sorry for freaking out on you and I'm sorry that, I just didn't know what to do. Thanks for looking out for me, your the best.
I hung up and waited for his call back. I went to get something good to eat and to drink and then went and take a shower. it felt good to take a hot shower. It was getting late and I still hadn't heard from Nathen...
continue reading...
rode for two mais hours before stopping to get gas for my bike. I drove up into a gas station and pulled off my helmet, and shook out my hair. I found a credit card from Carlisle and Esme and a cell phone Alice had provided me with. I called Alice.
Hey, Alice. I said.
Hey Addi. Alice said.
I'm sorry, I couldn't take it any mais and I didn't know what to do. I said.
I know, I saw it coming. There is a credit card in your your jaqueta with cellphone and your ipod. I figured you could use some música for the drive. She said.
Thanks so much and I'm sorry. I told her again.
Its ok, she said.
Well...
continue reading...
posted by surfergal
When I woke up, I felt like Emmet or another Vampire was sitting on my shoulder. I can't describe the pain.When my vision was clear Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Jasper were in the room. Carlisle walked over to me and said.
Addi, how do you feel? He ask.
My shoulder its hurting really badly. I told him.
Okay. Carlisle said and then walked out of the room.
Where is Nathen? I ask.
Alice looked at me and said, He's fine.
Oh okay. I said.
I didn't know where he was but I shouldn't have to know where he was as long as he was okay. I didn't want to be so clingy, like always asking what are you doing,...
continue reading...