bob esponja calça quadrada PLANKTONS VICTORY

darthzeus posted on Aug 12, 2012 at 07:06PM
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over a year ago darthzeus said…
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one day spongebob was working a double shift. THE NIGHT SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!
"see ya tommorow boys " said Mr.Krab. 'But Mr. Krab i dont want to stay with this yellow freak of nature"
said squidward. meanwhile....
*tonight plankton will put a gang of fish in a shoting act at the krusty krab. then he will call the police and blame squidward , while spongebob will be too shocked to move. plankton will then succed*
at12:00 plankton put his plan to work at 12:30 squiwar d,the gang ,a nd the policewere gone at 1:00 plankton went into the krusty krab and ......

More chapters coming soon please chech in spread the word
over a year ago darthzeus said…
crying
write please reply
over a year ago ChocolateGuy123 said…
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That was good,but it could definitely use some work.I suggest making the chapters longer and adding more detail about what's going on,and a little more dialogue.I love the plot,though!And sure,I'll spread the word!:D
over a year ago darthzeus said…
laugh
thanks ill take that into consideration talk to me if you have ideas or any suggestions
thanks again and yeah please spread the word
over a year ago darthzeus said…
hello
over a year ago darthzeus said…
... chapter 2
patrick went in and snuck around spongebob he unlocked the door to mr. krabs office
 ... chapter 2 patrick went in and snuck around spongebob he unlocked the door to mr. krabs office
over a year ago darthzeus said…
hi