Hello sad song fanpopers

Okay so I know this is proberly goin to sound terrible but I have come up with a verse and the chourus to a song that I am composição literária and I want you to say if you like it and if you can come up with another verse and a title. Thanks!

My bloods pouring to the ground
And you don't even care.
I look at you pleading
And you just walk away.
You ripped out my coração and soul
Burned them to ash
Now you say you amor me
You say you want me back?

Get the hell away from me
You've hurt me
Get out of my life
You've scarred me
You were the best thing in my life
Then you turned and walked away
You say you amor me
And still you walk away