I NEED HELP!!!!

ok i am in the making of making a story called mysterious amor can you guys please please help me por messageing me so i can give you a link to the first chapter and then can you please comment on it or come back too the message and tell me what you think or you can just answer this pergunta and say "can i please have a link?" and i will message you and give you a link please help me i need help i dont feel that people no it exists enuff. [sry if i am miss spelling a lot lol.]

and if you like the first i will send you a link too the segundo chapter and so on and so fourth.

there are 8 chapters so far.