Do you like this poem I made?

*Yesterday
Firstly, it's only a poem if it's in verse form. :P So...
*Today, Yesterday and Tomorrow. {Assuming that you capitalized those words on purpose to signify special value for them.}
All a blur.
Alone, lost and Abandoned.
Can't survive.
My mind is blank.
I have no words.
My eyes are shut.
Just let me die.
Stab me, drain me, throw me away.
I have no soul.
Thanks for killing me,
Dropping me dead,
I have no words.
All a blur.

Secondly... ummm... eh. It's okay, I guess. Kinda dull and inconsistent, honestly, plus the theme isn't really my thing. But I guess it's not bad.

I read "Do you like this porn I made?"

and seems a bit a dark. Too dark.


It doesn't send the right message. We are trying to STOP suicide not trying to encouraging it.