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In my life nothing and no one is perfect except the calm sound of a river in a soundless forest or the gental grace of a deer in the wild. I find no perfection in tall skyscrapers or new paved streets. The smell of freshly cut grama smells like it's own blood. The only place I have true perfection is in my own mind where a river of thoughts always runs and eventualy tricals down over my eyes where I find myself in my own wonderland until I am snapped back to the world of imperfect things. But when I snap back I still ponder and remember what I did in my wonderland. I have swam with sereias down to the deep reaches of the ocean to find atlantis. I have flown with birds across a valley of many flowers, I have slept in a cave at the foot of a colina with a urso cub, I have swam in a river and over a water fall. My encounters only remembered a few years later por pictures I drew. I always think once I snap back "why not a little longer? why not let me dream a little longer?"

 fly210 posted over a year ago
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
do you really expect me to read all of that?
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 do you really expect me to read all of that?
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XD
mintymidget210 posted over a year ago
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x3
XxKeithHarkinxX posted over a year ago
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T.T
fly210 posted over a year ago
someone_save_me said:
Yooo



what
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sideshowbobbart said:
wow! that's me!!! :O
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TheDirector said:
That was very poetic (= I know what you mean about having your thoughts be the most perfect place. I'm always in my mind and thoughts xD It's mais secure there.
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thx.
fly210 posted over a year ago
BeastBoyCahill said:
Epicness, yo!
Do you know what would be the perfect ending for that?
This picture:
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 Epicness, yo! Do you know what would be the perfect ending for that? This picture:
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fly210 posted over a year ago
Bananaaddict said:
tl;dr
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Sandfire_Paiger said:
Tl;dr.


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BlindBandit92 said:
Not bad. Actually it was a very nice poem but you sorta made me imagine you were Alice when you said you were in your own wonderland.
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.......... I'm not sure what to reply to this..........
fly210 posted over a year ago
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^What I said wasn't an insult btw.
BlindBandit92 posted over a year ago
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ok, then thanks
fly210 posted over a year ago
Usui--takumi said:
Here's the title:
Low Budget
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-.-"
fly210 posted over a year ago
Aqua_Rose said:
It's good :) As others have all ready said, it's very poetic.

However (please don't hurt me!) there are a few spelling mistakes, such as 'gental' should probably be 'gentle', and 'tricals' should be 'trickles', and Atlantis should have a capital letter because it's a place (real or otherwise). There are others, but realy that's just me being picky- nobody else seems to have noticed.

Overall, it's good- and you can only get better so long as you keep practising! :)
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-.-" I take extra spelling classes ok?
fly210 posted over a year ago
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I did say I was being picky -_-
Aqua_Rose posted over a year ago
springely said:
China called, they want their mural back.
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lol
BlindBandit92 posted over a year ago
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