Whats your opinion of this fanfic?

"Never approach strangers in the forest! They could have raped you!" Her mother shockingly replied.

WHY AM I UNABLE TO STOP LAUGHING AT THAT.
RAEP. RAEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP.

...*ahem* It's alright. There were a few typos, but no too much.
I know it's a short story, but a bit mais detail would do you good.