here is my entry from metillca's contest first im puting up some links you should relly see and i have no idea what a plot is
trailer: link
FULL movie(subtitled): link
cariters
ponyo:private (5 years old)
Sosuke:skipper (5 years old)
Sosuke's mom:marlene
ponyo's dad:kowlski
water monster things:rico
ponyo's mom: ms.kowlski99 (elizabith) congrads your married to kowlski =P
skipper was heading to a relly small but close de praia, praia por himself. he lived on a cliff por the sea with marlene. skipper saw something relly shiny so he went in the water and picked it up. it was a gold peixe stuck in a jar.the peixe was black and white
"a fish?"
skipper tryed to get the peixe out por pulling twisting and pushing then he droped the peixe and the jar broke."are you alive?" skipper put it down thinking it was dead "i was too late"
he stared to bled alittle on his foot he looked down then the peixe licked his cut.
"hey its alive!"
skipper looked around and saw some gatos and saw a bucket.he took some water and put it in the bucket and brought the peixe to his house. all of a suddent a pinguim with a mask covering his beek and a mow hawk came out of the blue.skipper ran to his house but rico couldint pass something for a reson and he turn into water.
"marlene! marlene!"
"skipper come in the car were genna be late"
"come look at this!"
back at the de praia, praia kowlski came up from the water in a boat/subrien.
"did you find him rico?" kowlski asked
"bzsjyaysgnfbs bv"
"HE BEN CAPTURED por PENGUINS?!?!? oh shoot"
marlene and skipper were in a smart car. skipper had to go to his boot camp for kids his age and marlene had to go work at small clenic seguinte to the boot camp school.
"now what did you want to show me skipper?"marlene asked
"i saved a fish"
"he loooks cute ^^"
"i think im genna name him.....private...what if he's hungry"
skipper got a butterscottlolly popthat he left in the car."want butterscott?" then private jump and ate the whole lollypop!
"were here!"marlene said
"i hope the techer dosent get mad at me when i bring the fish." skipper went to the de praia, praia por the boot camp.
"your seguro here"
"skippa!"private said
"huh. =)"
"private,skippa"private keeps on saying
skipper was giggleing
until rico came back in water form in waves and took private!
"private!private!!!!"skipper was yelling
"skipper!"marlene yelled she picked up skipper (yeah she stong!) and they went início ealry
kowlski was the one who took private and brought him to his place.he put private in a bubble
"i cant belive you ran away to the surface wrold"kowlski said
"i want t be a penguin!"private said
"WHAT!?!?! there dicuting cretures i was a pinguim once and i begged to be turned back" (kowlski lookes like a pinguim but he's not)
"i want flippers and feet!"
it went silence agien untill 2 feet poped out of private then 2 flippers
"TELL ME YOU DIDNT LICK pinguim BLOOD!"kowlski yelled
he ran too all of his postions and started to drink it then he put his flippers pushing down on the bubble trying to turn him back
"revert revert revert!"
then suddly private turn back into a peixe alseep.
"its the only way to keep nature at its balince"kowlski said then he put the bubble into a bigger bubble where all his little fishy brothers were went on his barco thing and went to who knows where! but then one por one each brother came nawing on the bubble till all of them (private has a whole lot of brothers) were trying to get him out till pop! private grew legs flippers and a beek. he cut the bigger bubble and water came pooring out till the whole place was filled with water then he looked compelty like a pinguim and all his brother turn into water peixe and they were heading for the surface
mean while a huge storm hit. skipper went to see marlene at the clenic and the lights were out. "hey skipper the lights are out why not you wait over there" said marlene
"marlene go with skipper well be alright" said one of the workers
skipper and marlene were heading home.no boats were in sight its like all of them sank. everyone went to the shelters exept them they were on the other saide where you wernt suppose to go.skipper was looking out the window until he saw a big water peixe thing
"marlene i think i saw a fish!"skipper shouted
he kept on seeing mais peixe becuse they were following them. out at sea the sailors were hanging on until they saw a little boy runing on the huge waves
"I SEE A LITTLE BOY!"on of the sailors yelled
private was runing on the ruff water following marlene and skipper and then he fell in the ocean.
"MARLENE I SEE A LITTLE BOY THAT FELL!"
"what?!?!"
they got out of the car and saw nothing. when they finaly reched the house a flipper stick out of a wave and there was a penguin
"COME WITH US!"yelled marlene
private ran to skipper and hug him.
"skipper do you know him?"marlene said
skipper looked at him for a second
"private?"
private got relly happy and shook his head yes but the storm was still going on they got insaide to relax. por then private was alsleep.
"skipper i have to go to the clenic i have to help them" marlene said
"but i want to go with you"skipper said
"lison to me your smart and strong our house is like a light house everyone depends on it so you need to stay here"marlene said
private and skipper were both alsleep on the sofa but kowlski was looking in the window standing on rico
"OH NO HE TURNED INTO A PENGUIN!"kowlski yelled but then he saw a light. "=0 shes here!"
kowlski got on his barco to meet his wife AKA mother nature
"thank goodness your here private went to the pinguim world"
"private? what a wonderful boy"elizabeth said
"if the moon gets any closer well be doomed!"
"Dear what if he gave up his powers if there frendship is true"
"but!"
"shhh let the little ones sleep"
the seguinte morning the hole city was under watter flooded except for skipper and private.
"WHOA!"skipper said
private took his head under water and so did skipper and they saw big peixe swiming everywhere
"wheres marlene? i wish we had a boat"skipper said
"theres a barco skippa!"private said pointing to a toy barco
"thats too small"
"no!" then private made the barco bigger till it was life size!
"AWESOME!"
they brouth the barco outside and got it reddy.skipper had his captins hat and they paked stuff for the trip
"private ill steer and you wach ok!"skipper said
"ok!"
the barco needed a candle to go though the bolier with startes the jets.skipper lit the candal and there were off.
30 mins later
the whole town were in boats with flags and the captin was in front
"do you need acisstance?!?!"yelled the captin
"no were good!"said private
the captin saluted them and skipper sauted them back
private got verry sleepy
the candal was bured out but they had a smaller one
"private can you make this bigger"skipper asked
private nodded his head and tryed but nothing happened. they were getting closer to land until the barco started to srink but they hit land it was a rode.skipper ran and found the car but no one was in there
"MARLENE!"
no answer
then there was a tunal
"dont let go of my hand"skipper said to private
but private was turning back into a peixe so skipper ran to the water and put private there
"PRIVATE WAKE UP DONT DIE!"skipper yelled out crying
"let him rest come with me all the people are safe"said kowlski
skipper didnt trust hin so he ran until kowlski brouth him under water.everyone was in a huge bubble where you can breath water! everyone was seguro and helthy but marlene was talking to private's mom.then skipper came (private was stil la fish)
"tell me do you amor private (LIKE him not like like XP)"elizabeth asked
"yes a pinguim or a fish"skipper answerd
"private will you give up your powers to be with this boy?"she asked
private shook his head yes then ezilabith smailed and put private in a bubble.
"skipper when you go to the surface pop the bubble and private would become a full penguin"elizabeth told him
"take care of my son"kowlski told skipper then they went to land
"you did a good thing kowlski"elizabeth told him and then kissed him
skipper pop the bubble and private turn intoa pinguim on the cliff bye the sea.
The End
trailer: link
FULL movie(subtitled): link
cariters
ponyo:private (5 years old)
Sosuke:skipper (5 years old)
Sosuke's mom:marlene
ponyo's dad:kowlski
water monster things:rico
ponyo's mom: ms.kowlski99 (elizabith) congrads your married to kowlski =P
skipper was heading to a relly small but close de praia, praia por himself. he lived on a cliff por the sea with marlene. skipper saw something relly shiny so he went in the water and picked it up. it was a gold peixe stuck in a jar.the peixe was black and white
"a fish?"
skipper tryed to get the peixe out por pulling twisting and pushing then he droped the peixe and the jar broke."are you alive?" skipper put it down thinking it was dead "i was too late"
he stared to bled alittle on his foot he looked down then the peixe licked his cut.
"hey its alive!"
skipper looked around and saw some gatos and saw a bucket.he took some water and put it in the bucket and brought the peixe to his house. all of a suddent a pinguim with a mask covering his beek and a mow hawk came out of the blue.skipper ran to his house but rico couldint pass something for a reson and he turn into water.
"marlene! marlene!"
"skipper come in the car were genna be late"
"come look at this!"
back at the de praia, praia kowlski came up from the water in a boat/subrien.
"did you find him rico?" kowlski asked
"bzsjyaysgnfbs bv"
"HE BEN CAPTURED por PENGUINS?!?!? oh shoot"
marlene and skipper were in a smart car. skipper had to go to his boot camp for kids his age and marlene had to go work at small clenic seguinte to the boot camp school.
"now what did you want to show me skipper?"marlene asked
"i saved a fish"
"he loooks cute ^^"
"i think im genna name him.....private...what if he's hungry"
skipper got a butterscottlolly popthat he left in the car."want butterscott?" then private jump and ate the whole lollypop!
"were here!"marlene said
"i hope the techer dosent get mad at me when i bring the fish." skipper went to the de praia, praia por the boot camp.
"your seguro here"
"skippa!"private said
"huh. =)"
"private,skippa"private keeps on saying
skipper was giggleing
until rico came back in water form in waves and took private!
"private!private!!!!"skipper was yelling
"skipper!"marlene yelled she picked up skipper (yeah she stong!) and they went início ealry
kowlski was the one who took private and brought him to his place.he put private in a bubble
"i cant belive you ran away to the surface wrold"kowlski said
"i want t be a penguin!"private said
"WHAT!?!?! there dicuting cretures i was a pinguim once and i begged to be turned back" (kowlski lookes like a pinguim but he's not)
"i want flippers and feet!"
it went silence agien untill 2 feet poped out of private then 2 flippers
"TELL ME YOU DIDNT LICK pinguim BLOOD!"kowlski yelled
he ran too all of his postions and started to drink it then he put his flippers pushing down on the bubble trying to turn him back
"revert revert revert!"
then suddly private turn back into a peixe alseep.
"its the only way to keep nature at its balince"kowlski said then he put the bubble into a bigger bubble where all his little fishy brothers were went on his barco thing and went to who knows where! but then one por one each brother came nawing on the bubble till all of them (private has a whole lot of brothers) were trying to get him out till pop! private grew legs flippers and a beek. he cut the bigger bubble and water came pooring out till the whole place was filled with water then he looked compelty like a pinguim and all his brother turn into water peixe and they were heading for the surface
mean while a huge storm hit. skipper went to see marlene at the clenic and the lights were out. "hey skipper the lights are out why not you wait over there" said marlene
"marlene go with skipper well be alright" said one of the workers
skipper and marlene were heading home.no boats were in sight its like all of them sank. everyone went to the shelters exept them they were on the other saide where you wernt suppose to go.skipper was looking out the window until he saw a big water peixe thing
"marlene i think i saw a fish!"skipper shouted
he kept on seeing mais peixe becuse they were following them. out at sea the sailors were hanging on until they saw a little boy runing on the huge waves
"I SEE A LITTLE BOY!"on of the sailors yelled
private was runing on the ruff water following marlene and skipper and then he fell in the ocean.
"MARLENE I SEE A LITTLE BOY THAT FELL!"
"what?!?!"
they got out of the car and saw nothing. when they finaly reched the house a flipper stick out of a wave and there was a penguin
"COME WITH US!"yelled marlene
private ran to skipper and hug him.
"skipper do you know him?"marlene said
skipper looked at him for a second
"private?"
private got relly happy and shook his head yes but the storm was still going on they got insaide to relax. por then private was alsleep.
"skipper i have to go to the clenic i have to help them" marlene said
"but i want to go with you"skipper said
"lison to me your smart and strong our house is like a light house everyone depends on it so you need to stay here"marlene said
private and skipper were both alsleep on the sofa but kowlski was looking in the window standing on rico
"OH NO HE TURNED INTO A PENGUIN!"kowlski yelled but then he saw a light. "=0 shes here!"
kowlski got on his barco to meet his wife AKA mother nature
"thank goodness your here private went to the pinguim world"
"private? what a wonderful boy"elizabeth said
"if the moon gets any closer well be doomed!"
"Dear what if he gave up his powers if there frendship is true"
"but!"
"shhh let the little ones sleep"
the seguinte morning the hole city was under watter flooded except for skipper and private.
"WHOA!"skipper said
private took his head under water and so did skipper and they saw big peixe swiming everywhere
"wheres marlene? i wish we had a boat"skipper said
"theres a barco skippa!"private said pointing to a toy barco
"thats too small"
"no!" then private made the barco bigger till it was life size!
"AWESOME!"
they brouth the barco outside and got it reddy.skipper had his captins hat and they paked stuff for the trip
"private ill steer and you wach ok!"skipper said
"ok!"
the barco needed a candle to go though the bolier with startes the jets.skipper lit the candal and there were off.
30 mins later
the whole town were in boats with flags and the captin was in front
"do you need acisstance?!?!"yelled the captin
"no were good!"said private
the captin saluted them and skipper sauted them back
private got verry sleepy
the candal was bured out but they had a smaller one
"private can you make this bigger"skipper asked
private nodded his head and tryed but nothing happened. they were getting closer to land until the barco started to srink but they hit land it was a rode.skipper ran and found the car but no one was in there
"MARLENE!"
no answer
then there was a tunal
"dont let go of my hand"skipper said to private
but private was turning back into a peixe so skipper ran to the water and put private there
"PRIVATE WAKE UP DONT DIE!"skipper yelled out crying
"let him rest come with me all the people are safe"said kowlski
skipper didnt trust hin so he ran until kowlski brouth him under water.everyone was in a huge bubble where you can breath water! everyone was seguro and helthy but marlene was talking to private's mom.then skipper came (private was stil la fish)
"tell me do you amor private (LIKE him not like like XP)"elizabeth asked
"yes a pinguim or a fish"skipper answerd
"private will you give up your powers to be with this boy?"she asked
private shook his head yes then ezilabith smailed and put private in a bubble.
"skipper when you go to the surface pop the bubble and private would become a full penguin"elizabeth told him
"take care of my son"kowlski told skipper then they went to land
"you did a good thing kowlski"elizabeth told him and then kissed him
skipper pop the bubble and private turn intoa pinguim on the cliff bye the sea.
The End
Hello penguins I am war pinguim and I have a lightsaber and I can ues the force.I have some very funny thing I whant to show you but I want a puple lightsaber but my sister fun123fun make my lightsaber. HI!!!!!! that was my sister. any way i wanted to go here becuse she told me all the stories uyou make and the people so i will enjoy being here!
P.S. tanks fun123fun (my sister like i said) for drawing my icon!!!!!
fun123fun: mwhahah i took his aritcle! mwahahaha ok yes he is my brother (im not so happy with that -_-) the thing he wants to show you later he thought it was relly funny HE WAS LAGHUING HIS HEAD OFF and he was laugphing when school started.
P.S. tanks fun123fun (my sister like i said) for drawing my icon!!!!!
fun123fun: mwhahah i took his aritcle! mwahahaha ok yes he is my brother (im not so happy with that -_-) the thing he wants to show you later he thought it was relly funny HE WAS LAGHUING HIS HEAD OFF and he was laugphing when school started.
A new start chapter 4
The seguinte dia Val had to go to the vet she now has to stay there till she gets better, but things dont look that good, I also found somthing out, I learned that Lily and Val are sisters ~no wonder there so close ~
I also recived a message from my Sargent who wants me to go on a secret mission its three days long ~ three days long... ive been for longer missions but not a three dia long mission ~. I had to the the others that I had to go somewhere for three days, they asked me perguntas but i told them i would be alright they just had to trust me.
Lily was crying that night she missed Val so much, I tried to make her calm down and she ended up falling asleep on my lap.
Im leaving for my mission this morning at 5 AM ~ thats early ~.
I hope things get better soon,
mabye with a new start
The seguinte dia Val had to go to the vet she now has to stay there till she gets better, but things dont look that good, I also found somthing out, I learned that Lily and Val are sisters ~no wonder there so close ~
I also recived a message from my Sargent who wants me to go on a secret mission its three days long ~ three days long... ive been for longer missions but not a three dia long mission ~. I had to the the others that I had to go somewhere for three days, they asked me perguntas but i told them i would be alright they just had to trust me.
Lily was crying that night she missed Val so much, I tried to make her calm down and she ended up falling asleep on my lap.
Im leaving for my mission this morning at 5 AM ~ thats early ~.
I hope things get better soon,
mabye with a new start