Please comment your opinoin should i make mais or do you like it???

Hey, I wrote a fanfic but no-one seems to be leitura it. I'm hoping it just cuz they can't find it. Please could you read it and tell me what you think?

It was a normal dia in Destiny Islands.The sun was shining and the residents were as happy as ever.But when Kioka woke up,Destiny Islands had changed forever.Some of the ideas from this fic came from my anterior fic but I'm ditching that one.

As the fallout occurs, the story closes on Zexion's reflection

The final battle of the story.

Xenmas reports something that forever changes everything.

A dia that belongs only to LarSon

Axel attempts another assassination.

A huge miscelânea, smorgasbord explodes in Twilight Town.

Zexion and Jason go on a mission together.