part 12

I found myself trying to collect my thoughts and summarize the danger I was in as well as my assets. The biggest asset seemed to be the fact that when I was around Edward I could catch small bits of people's thoughts. It wasn't easy and I found myself admiring him for dealing with it full force constantly. He could read por mind with no problem unless his mate Bella was near, which was often. Edward couldn't read Bella's mind so I got a small bit of that power. Both powers had their benefits. Bella handled my ever increasing list of abnormalities the best. Renesmee also handled it well....

part 27

I walked back to my room and started composição literária in an attempt to organize my scattered thoughts.

Dangers: Them losing there tempers, Accidents, Me forcing them to hurt me (example: biting Seth)

Inconveniences: Eating, Sleeping, Phasing, A house

Benefits: Parents, siblings?

Then, something dawned on me. I’d been thinking about the vampires’ strength and speed as a danger. Could the power around me also be a benefit? A protection? It was like trusting a man with a machine gun to protect you. Wise, yet stupid. From what I’d observed Edward, Jasper and Emmett were not the kind of boys to...

Sorry it took so long!

Part 26
I couldn’t stay with vampires. That was insane. I shook my head in answer to Carlisle’s pergunta “It’s impractical” I sighed. “Why?” he asked. “It’s dangerous and I sleep and eat and…” He cut me off gently “Wait. Take a moment to collect your thoughts. Come up with a list and we’ll go through it.” I stayed in his arms quietly and made my list. I nodded when I was done. He smiled encouragingly “Go ahead” I decided to start with one that had to do with his family, rather than my safety. “I have to eat and sleep it would be a significant...

part 2

The she-vampire who had grabbed me clamped a hand over my mouth and muttered something about just wanting to talk. Right. A small part of my brain noted that her eyes were not what I expected but I really didn't have time to think about that. I was stronger than the she-vampire expected me to be. She wasn't using any energy in holding me. I broke free for a dividido, dividir segundo and flung myself wildly. Whether it was because I was dizzy or because she moved I don't know but I flung myself right into her marble hard body. Everything went black.

When I came to I heard the she-vampire gasp. She whispered...

set a few months after breaking dawn
please tell me how I can improve... I want to write the best story I can

Part 1

Juliet- I walked through the large room rather absentmindedly. I had recently developed a slight interest in medicine and so I had decided to attend a conference. There were enough families there. A teenager wouldn't stick out. I had never really done anything with my life. Maybe I could be a doctor. If I was being honest with myself I would admit that I was just searching for something to ease my guilt. I had never contributed much to the universe. I had potential, not because...

part 25

It took me a few minutos to realize that I was sitting mais or less calmly, while a vampire (Esme) had her arm around me. I couldn't beleive it. Had I lost my instincts? Or, mais terrifying still, was I beginning to trust this vampire? I supposed if I was going to trust one of them it would be her. She was always so sweet and had mais than enough amor to go around. I supposed I was beginning to trust her a bit. Of course, I knew there were things that would push her to hurt me. She loved her kids and she would do anything to help them, yet I knew I would have warning. I was nearly positive...

part 24

I realized that after Seth touched my hand I'd started stroking his nose and head absentmindedly. He nuzzled back. I withdrew my hand, though it felt instantly cold in comparison. He walked away to phase back, then sat seguinte to me in human form. "Did you have a nice nap?" he asked cheerfully. I nodded vaguely. Carlisle walked up to me "Actually, we were just talking about that. We're a bit concerned that you're not getting enough sleep." I could see their point. "I don't get as tiered around you." I admitted. "But then when I leave it catches up with me." He nodded thoughtfully. "We'll...

sorry this took so long

part 23

When Seth and I got to the Cullen's house, Esme invited him to sit and visit. We both sat on a sofa. Carlisle, Esme, Jasper and Emmett were there while Rosalie came in and out of the garage. Esme, ever the hostess, soon brought out a bowl of tortilla chips already topped with a festive salsa. Seth ate while he watched TV with Jasper. Not wanting to be offensive, I decided to eat five chips, hoping that would be enough. After my first, I started talking with Esme. I was exhausted and couldn't really focus. As I reached into the bowl again, my brain was completely...

part 22

Leah called that afternoon. She said she was babysitting Claire and wanted me to come hang out with them. She was watching Claire until ten and Claire would be in cama at eight. It sounded nice. In a weird way. I figured I was as seguro there as I was with the vampires. As I was wondering how to go about obtaining the Cullens' permission, Alice skipped in. She looked curious "Your future just disappeared" She said matter-of-factly. Edward was passing por the hall and paused. Bella wasn't near, so he had full access to my mind. "You don't have to ask permission. You are our guest. Just let...

part 21

Seth was apologizing frantically for scaring me. The others had frozen. It looked like they felt bad for Seth and were anxious to see my reaction. “Sorry” I muttered. I really was sorry. I wasn’t going to change , but I was sorry. A part of me wanted to reach out my arms and let him balanço me, but I didn’t.

Leah came for the last fifteen minutos or so. Talking with her was nice. She at least understood the dangers of vampires. I gradually learned that she and Sam had been in amor before Sam had imprinted. I felt bad for her and the story helped me understand her better.

On the drive...

part 20

As I stood still, with Seth's hand on my arm, I wondered why I wasn't following my conman sense. I always had before. Perhaps I was afraid of angering Seth. Maybe I just liked the warmth. Being cold because of vampire default was uncomfortable, but the warmth that came with werewolf default was wonderful. It felt like sitting too long in front of a fogo when it was snowing outside. I knew I shouldn't be that warm, but I couldn't walk away. Seth soon lowered his hand, but I remained warm.

Renesmee asked me if I would use my shadow of her gift to show something to her and Claire. I chose...

part 19

After some hesitation and haggling about curfews, Edward and Bella agreed to let their daughter go. Bella pulled me aside "You might want to talk to Carlisle before you go to make sure your ribs will be alright." Carlisle said that he didn't anticipate any problems. He also placed a small silver cell phone into my hand. "If there's any problem: call me. I might know enough to help" He seemed to realize how unpredictable my werewolf default was.

In the end, Jacob drove with Renesmee in the front seat. Seth and I sat in the back. "Oh" Jacob said suddenly "Sam's wife, Emily... just don't...

part 17

Juliet-

They were reasoning with me. They knew I wasn’t going to fight them but they weren’t satisfied because they knew I wasn’t. First they had they had told me that I had to stay because of the wolves. They said I had to figure things out. I didn’t mention that I would rather have a hundred cracked ribs than stay. Then they started telling me why I didn’t have to worry about being hurt. They said they could be careful and they were not overly tempted to drink my blood.

They told me about Bella. She had been around them while she was still human and she was fine. But Bella...

part 18

I was going to talk to Carlisle, but he was talking with the humans. I decided to talk with Edward. Despite Bella being the room, it was fairly simple to get Edward's attention with my thoughts. He walked up to me and knelt por the sofá I was on. "I should leave now... I just realized: What if I phase?" He didn't seem disturbed "We've already addressed the issue. Weren't you told?" He paused a moment and tuned into several people's thoughts "Ah- there was a misscommunication as to who was going to talk with you. I apologize. Jasper has a pretty good idea of how upset the lobos have...

Special Edition: Leah’s pov. It will go back to Juliet’s after this part

part 16

Leah-
I was doing homework when someone knocked on my apartment door. I opened it to see Jake. He was cringing noticeably. “What’s wrong?” I asked instantly. “Nothing’s wrong. Can I come in?” I moved aside and let him sit. “How are you?” he asked. I growled at him “You’re stalling” He sighed “Leah I’m… I’m going to have to ask you to do something. Quill and Embry are already doing it but I’m not sure if you can.” I glared at him “I can hold my own” I reminded him. He grinned...

part 15

Jacob was pulling Seth into another room. Edward trailed behind them. The lobos explained to me the Alpha command. The double voice of the Alpha (leader of the pack) had the power to make the pack obey. When Jacob, Seth and Edward reentered the room, Seth seemed to be trying not to stare at me. It was evidently a difficult task. The lobos began to seem on edge.

Like a lightning bolt, Jasper ran to one of the lobos and placed a hand on his shoulder. The lobo soon dropped. Soon, Jasper was doing the same thing to the confused lobos left and right, two at a time. Edward obviously understood...

part 14

Taking in a painful breath, I crawled to a nearby payphone and stuck some change in it. I hadn't thrown away the paper with the vampire and werewolf contact information. I dialed the Cullen's início phone. I was scared that they would have moved. I knew they moved every few years just like I did so that no one would know they weren't aging. They used to live only a few miles from La Push (where the lobos lived). Now they were about an hora and a half away.

Someone answered on the first ring "Hello?" I struggled to form coherent sentences "Um... this is Juliet. I umm... met you a few months...

part 12

The phone conversation took a long time. At one point I heard Bella say "Yes I know she hasn't even met Sam yet" in a slightly exasperated voice. Edward must have heard something I didn't form the other end because he took the phone and said "Do not ever talk to my wife in that tone of voice Jacob Black... She's a human in a house full of vampiros with lobisomens visiting frequently. Be reasonable... Thank you Jacob... If you would like I will give her contact information and she can keep in touch if she wants to." He started composição literária something on a notepad near the phone then said goodbye...

part 13

I made it to LA eventually. My cash supply was severely reduced due to transportation so I had to do a lot of odd jobs. In a few years I would have to either win the lottery, find a buried treasure or mover somewhere other than America where a "fourteen ano old" could get a full time job. I loved LA. I missed friends from years atrás though. I wouldn't be able to handle LA for four or five years. It was better in small doses. I felt emptier than I had in a long time.

The emails had slowed but not ceased. I usually took several days to respond but I checked almost every day. Two months after...