Does this story seem like it would become famous?

Well, as always, I'm afraid you can never really tell which stories are going to become famous. I've read many books which I've thought were absolutely brilliant, but aren't actually that well-known, often because they just aren't of the kind of subject that the majority of people want to read, not because they're bad books. The publishers of Harry Potter didn't think the public would like it, so they only published a small amount of copies on the first print run; but they ended up being very mistaken indeed. I'm afraid to say it is pretty hard to get a book published in the first place, let alone write a book that becomes famous. Competition is extremely high in the novel industry. However, if you're to stand any chance of getting a book published, you have to keep a few things in mind.

Firstly, is it the kind of book that you want to read? This is your topo, início priority; even if it's the kind of story that you think others may like, it will never be very successful if you aren't that keen on the plotline yourself. Another thing; avoid clichés like the plague. The books that become successful are those that stand out from the crowd; maybe it's in a genre that no-one's ever read before, maybe the characters are completely different, or maybe it just looks at things from a different viewpoint to the other books. You say your story is about three hunters, protecting villagers from monsters and beasts; this sounds like it could, if handled well, be an exciting and action-packed read. But when thinking of storylines, don't be afraid to think alternatively; what if the hunters weren't the always best of friends, for example? What if they only decided to travel with each other because of an unexpected incident, and then gradually built up a trust in each other? What if some of the monsters weren't always evil? What if they encountered a monster that seemed horrifyingly ugly and savage, but turned out to be a much different character than first imagined? What if some of the villagers turned out to be evil?

These are only a few examples, but never be afraid to think 'what if' when it comes to any plotline. Some of your craziest ideas may actually turn out to be very good indeed. Literary agents are flooded dia after dia with very clichéd stories, and sadly not one of them ever gets published. But with a fresh and open mind, well-developed characters and storyline and a genuine amor of the story you create...who knows, maybe you could get onto a winner. If not, just try again. Hope this helps :)

Not with your grammar and all those Mary Sue/ Gary Stues.

Personally, I don't read much action, but there are people who do, and my conselhos for you is this: there are three things to think about while composição literária a story- your WRITING, your CHARACTERS, and your READERS. A) You want your composição literária to be good so that people will want to read it. The way that I like to learn how to write better is read. I read books and study them, study sentence structure, plot lines, anything you can, study books. B) This is the Imagination club, after all, so use your imagination and think like your characters. What do they want? What would they do in this situation? Get to know your characters. C) Consider your readers. What do THEY want to read? Would this plot point make my readers throw this book across the room? Is that the effect you were going for? Just some stuff to think about while writing... good luck with your story!

It sounds pretty good. I don't like it much, personally, but I just don't like that kind of stuff but it does seem really good and creative. Maybe you could create a whole different world for them (you know what I mean, like Panem or Narnia or the Wizarding World or Middle Earth) and you could get really creative with it. That's one of the things I amor about stories- it's the other worlds the characters live in. It's so creative and fun. But then again, you can never tell which books/movies are going to become famous. Guess we'll just have to wait and see :)

It sounds kinda like a warped animê version of sobrenatural nil but I’d still watch it