This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything you could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
You said that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made you cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to mover on
And I am loosing you
You lost your faith in me
And said that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I amor you.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
You said that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made you cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to mover on
And I am loosing you
You lost your faith in me
And said that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell you everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I amor you.