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what do you think of this poem?

this is my first so just tell me if it sucks.

every time i look at you it makes my want too cry.

every time i look at you it makes me want too scream.

every time look at you it makes me want too die.

every time i look at you it makes me think of you and her lastnight.

does it suck should i right more?

lilred96 posted over a year ago

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LuhPerim said:

oi ^^ I read your poem and maaaan ! It's very cool, i mean.. It's a little bit sad, but very cool *-* Pretty good, congratulations ! You could make a song with this part . ^^ Well.. bye , good luck !!

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posted over a year ago

thanks

lilred96 posted over a year ago

i agree!well done..

lilacool posted over a year ago

i amor it

loveandpain posted over a year ago

Nicole360 said:

Every time i look at this poem i think hmmmmmmmmm nice poem,ps it didnt suck its a good poem

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posted over a year ago

yeah,i agree

lilacool posted over a year ago

kool poem

Lover-666-Emo posted over a year ago

lilacool said:

Ur poem roxx!Well done!
I feel sorry 4 u though cuz the message is clear of wat happened 'last night'...
Luv from ur friend lilacool

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posted over a year ago

iheartyou said:

i think it's cool, u should write more

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iluvtigers said:

dont be so hard on yourself it pretty good

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posted over a year ago

babyanime said:

i amor it it make me think what happen to me

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posted over a year ago

June4 said:

this is really awesome!!!

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posted over a year ago

teamsalvatore98 said:

i like it!!!

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posted over a year ago

nan0 said:

it pretty poem listen to this
pain kill me
pain kill my soul
pain kill my heart
pain amor my pain and i going to be in pain

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posted over a year ago

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