Ok, so I wrote this a long time ago. I think it sucks! What do you think? Please comment, I know it's bad but please don't me mean. I probably wrote it when I was about 12 or 13. If you have any suggestions I would amor to hear them. But like I said please don't leave mean comments. If you are wondering what it's about....I have no idea. It was just a aleatório thing I wrote in about 5 or 10 minutes.
Melting Hearts
Your coração melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
You feel dead on
the inside
You can hardly breathe
You fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
You have no
hope left
You hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around you going
through hell
Do you care?
Melting Hearts
Your coração melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
You feel dead on
the inside
You can hardly breathe
You fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
You have no
hope left
You hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around you going
through hell
Do you care?
