oi everyone this is my first artigo so if its bad plz don't hate and just tell me how I can improve. I'm open to any ideas so please leave a comment.depending on your comments will determine if I keep composição literária and sorry about spelling errors if there is any because I am composição literária this all on my iPod and the auto correct is being anoint. well here we go.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I said THINK about it". " Okay thank you now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the antro, den to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's antro, den she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did you ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He said he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for comida he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw dividido, dividir log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh oi Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, oi could I talk to you for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his friends and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this pergunta and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please comment if there is anything I can do to improve I amor hearing from people so please comment.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I said THINK about it". " Okay thank you now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the antro, den to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's antro, den she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did you ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He said he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for comida he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw dividido, dividir log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh oi Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, oi could I talk to you for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his friends and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this pergunta and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please comment if there is anything I can do to improve I amor hearing from people so please comment.
hello this is insider and we are here to talk about your mate cheating on you we have asked two peaple if they think this. and they said:
alphakat21: hell no! i trust kate with all my coração shes shown me nothing but amor since the dia we met
awwww that is so sweet lets see what the other interview collected
metalwolf116: no with a capital NO! i share complete trust and loyalty kate is my life.
and our last interveiw
katealphawolf: i would never cheat on jon he is the amor of my life!
well it looks like we have three loyal mates. but if you think your mate is cheating then contact me for an interveiw.
we will se you seguinte time on insider
alphakat21: hell no! i trust kate with all my coração shes shown me nothing but amor since the dia we met
awwww that is so sweet lets see what the other interview collected
metalwolf116: no with a capital NO! i share complete trust and loyalty kate is my life.
and our last interveiw
katealphawolf: i would never cheat on jon he is the amor of my life!
well it looks like we have three loyal mates. but if you think your mate is cheating then contact me for an interveiw.
we will se you seguinte time on insider