Ive been trying so hard to write a good story but noone comments on it so idk if i should stop or not , its young memories thats what its called

Don't give up! That's what you should do, don't ever give up!

I've been leitura them and they are really good. I like the story line a lot. I read them I just don't always comment

It's really good! Don't give up! Just because people don't comment doesn't mean they don't read it! Trust me, its the same thing with me. :)

Never give up on composição literária story's

I did though

I've read part of it. I think it's a good story, but you need to slow down the plot a little more. It seems a little too rushed. Other than that, good job!