Should I continue or not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]
For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of vampiros I had discovered. With all the raving stories of vampiros I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get mais information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...
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