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Sorry it's been so long (been on holiday and trying to like choose all my exam choices for ano 10)lifes been pretty hetic but enough of my life!!! Last time I left off Nessie and jake were going to keep their baby and now we visit them 9 months later. No one actually knows what to expect but the exact being of Aimme (youll know who she is when you read the chapter) will be discovered in the seguinte chapter. Also you would have noticed that this chapter is from Jakes point of veiw I had a fab time composição literária it and I hope you enjoy leitura it eaqually as much! Thankz for leitura and please leave comments as they are very much appreciated. I am going to shut up now and let you read the chapter so once again thankyou and enjoy...x
Amber/ Twilightsauce xxxxx


We had all come here for a picnic today, in the meadow, because it was a sunny day. We were all here the whole pack and all of the Cullen’s. The meadow was deserted and it looked peaceful and serene with arco iris, arco-íris spots dancing around.
Nessie was heavily pregnant and our baby was due any day. I was worried, I didn’t show it, but I was worried. What if the baby wasn’t normal, what if it was dangerous, what if Nessie got hurt? I couldn’t urso that. Like Bella, the womb seemed to be protected por vampire skin, making it impossible to get an ultrasound. My worries were the same as the rest of us but we kept quiet around Nessie, she gave us all a telling of every time we expressed any negative emotion around her. I knew that Nessie and our precious baby were going to be fine, but my mind couldn’t help wondering. Nessie was muttering in protest as Bella and Esme clutched her elbows as she staggered across the fresh grass. I went and lifted her up in my arms and sat down with her as she nestled into my lap, one hand cradling her huge stomach.
“Our beautiful baby is going to be born in less than a week and we still haven’t got a name for it!”Nessie laughed as Seth playfully through a cushion at her.
“Ugh, not again Nessie, I think we have gone through the entire name book already!” he called playfully.
Nessie stuck her tongue out of him and looked up at me, “What do you think, any ideas?”
“Umm, what about you eat and I speak, you must be starving?” I spoke at the right time, her stomach let of a huge growl and Esme handed her a plate of appetizing food. The rest of the pack dug in but I neglected my plate, musing over baby names.
“What about Elizabeth?” I asked Nessie raised her eyebrows in disgust. We wanted a name that has a special meaning and it was true that Elizabeth didn’t.
“Alicia?”
“It sounds to like Alice we would get confused, what about Adrianna?”
“Adrianna?” I said the dislike showing in my voice, “what about Aimee, spelt A-I-M-E-E, it means love, she would be truly loved right, that is if it is a she.”
“Aimee, I amor it. Jake since when did you get so good with names?”
I didn’t reply but laughed and gently wound a strand of her hair around my finger.
“Mmmm, Dad these rolls are like delicious, can I have another one?” she asked, sounding ashamed, Nessie’s appetite had literally doubled lately, but it was understandable she was feeding two after all. The only person who didn’t understand this was Nessie herself.
“Of course, here,” Dad said with a smile as he passed her one. She took the roll but before she could eat it she went totally still and then grabbed my hand and pulled it to her stomach. I felt a faint thumping coming from inside her, the baby was kicking our beautiful little Aimee. It sent shivers of pleasure down my spine to think of our beautiful little child in there.
Esme and Carlisle were looking at us with adoring expressions on their faces along with Alice and Jasper, Mum and Dad, Sam and Emily, Rose and Emmet and all of our family. Matches made in heaven were what Nessie said, and she was right, we all were.
Suddenly Nessie let out a gasp. Her roll dropped from her hand and her clutch on my hand became alarmingly tight.
“Jake, Jake I think my waters have just broken,” she said her voice weary and little. Slowly, I looked down, Nessie was definitely right; her waters had well and truly broken. My blood ran cold, this wasn’t right; it wasn’t meant to happen now, not here.
Carlisle and Edward leapt into action.
“Rose you pack up the stuff, Jake get Nessie. We need to get back to the house; now!” Edward called, as Carlisle came over to Nessie and me.
“Jake give Nessie to me, she can’t ride on your back in this condition.” He said, his voice was the same as usual but I could see a hint of urgency in his eyes.
“No, I want Jake!” she moaned, “Jake, don’t leave…” she cut of at the end, groaning in pain. I didn’t know much about child birth but I could guess that this baby wasn’t going to wait for anyone.
“Nessie, I will be right here, but you need to let Carlisle carry you; he knows what is happening.” I said trying to soothe her, “let’s go, now.” I murmured to Carlisle.
“Yes, we will meet back at our house.”
I rushed into the trees as Carlisle and the rest of them took of, I could hear other members of the pack rustling around. I whipped of my clothes and tied them around my ankle with the handy piece of thread that I kept in my pocket curtsey of Nessie.
When I had transformed, I bounded into the forest. I couldn’t see the rest of the pack but I could hear all of them, loud and clear.
This is it bro, you’re about to become a dad. So baby Aimee huh, cute name. What to get as a birth present, maybe a rattle- no that would be to breakable… Seth’s thoughts trailed of only to be replaced por Sam’s mais reassuring words.
oi Jake congratulations, remember keep your cool in there. Your gonna be a great dad kiddo. I heard the murmurs of agreement and encouragement from the rest of the pack as the big house came into view.
I rushed into the trees and got changed. It took me the most of fifteen segundos to get up to Nessie where she lay on a cama in the middle of what I thought was our old room. It had changed and there was now medical equipment and a cot sitting seguinte to the bed. My eyes whizzed over to Nessie who was lying down, hands on her stomach, her face scrunched up in pain.
“Nessie, oh Nessie, what have I done to you! Nessie this was a bad idea.” I cried my voice filled with horror. Her eyes immediately snapped open,
“Never say that again Jacob Black,” she growled through the pain, suddenly she let out an ear piercing howl of pain. Carlisle rushed over, while Esme and Bella stroked her forehead.
“Jacob, can I have a word?” Carlisle said as he glanced at Nessie’s contorted face, “we are going to need to operate on her to get the baby out. The womb has broken so it should be fairly simple. She is just not up to getting it out on her own.” He patted my arm as I nodded slowly, swallowing back bile. Esme looked up and rushed out of the room, I thought she was leaving because of the operation but she surprised me por coming back, her arms full of syringes and scalpels in plastic packets. Nessie looked up at me, her eyes confused through the pain.
“Jake, what’s going on?”
“Nessie we need to give you a small operation to get our baby out, but it’s gonna be fine. I promise,” as much as I wanted these words to be true, I couldn’t help thinking what if. I shook away the ghastly image from my head with vehement.
Nessie nodded slowly, beads of swat forming on her forehead as she withered in pain.
“Carlisle we need to hurry, what about the morphine?” I asked as he pulled up his sleeves and took a scalpel from Esme.
“Jake there is no time to lose, Nessie is only half human, and we need to hurry,”
This time I actually thought I was going to be sick, was Carlisle saying that Nessie could die? I nodded dumbly as Carlisle began. For some strange reason, Nessie’s diamond hard skin had become mais human like during her pregnancy, now I realized it was her body preparing itself.
Nessie was almost delirious through the pain, but she managed to hold on as I held her hand and told her how much I loved her, over and over again. I heard her scream as Carlisle cut into her. What had I done to Nessie?
It was half and hora later and my life had changed completely. I thought back to the haze of Nessie pain and the fast flowing blood and shuddered but it didn’t matter anymore, why, because Nessie was fine and so was our beautiful little girl. Our beautiful little Aimee was alive and healthy. When Carlisle first got her out he passed her to me. Our gorgeous little girl was covered in blood and screaming at the topo, início of her tiny lungs but she was still so beautiful. Tears of joy ran down my face as her little hand wrapped around my finger. Carlisle was still working over Nessie but I walked over to her and showed her to Aimee.
“This is your beautiful mother, Aimee. She can’t hold you at the moment but if she could then she would and she would tell you how much she loves you and how that we will always be here for you; always.” I don’t know why I told her this, she couldn’t understand me but it felt like the right thing to do.
So here I sit, seguinte to Nessie who is now wide awake, our beautiful little Aimee in her arms. Newspapers say that miracles happen (like people surviving from serious plane crashes) but I think that is all just luck. The real miracles, are sitting in the room right here with me- my beautiful family, Nessie and Aimee.
“I amor you,” I felt that I had to say it, the words had never been said in a mais meaningful way- I was sure of that.
“I know, and I amor you. Forever and always, my true love.”
I knew than Nessie was going to be fine and my beautiful little Aimee was to. The only pergunta that remained now is what was she?
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him mais shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a seguro distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be showing you the best techniques for composição literária your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what you may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, you have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before you decide on a plot, you should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired por some comments about stuffed animals/plushies on youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, imagens and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, or thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To show how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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posted by Lord_Anubis
If you mates like it, comment, I'll make mais if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, you guys! What are you doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, or you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall cachorros on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the fantasia series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In composição literária the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead animais and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit mais Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of cama with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white lobo outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other lobos howling, the white lobo runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that lobo for a long time, Roxana walked back to her cama and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a fotografia of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were chocolate brown color, she pulled herself out of the cama and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but mais importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the dia my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some dia I hope his coração gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). Or like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in procurar of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...
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posted by DxCFan123
"Oh, oi Sam!" I said as I found her in the hall while going to lunch. "How are you? You seem upset. Something wrong?" I said. The edges of my saia floated up as I walked. Marie's jewelery jingled along my neck, ears, wrists and fingers. It really hurt to get my ears pierced, but the earrings are so beautiful!

"Nothing's wrong" she murmured and pulled her arms closer to her chest. She looked away from me, at the floor. "Ah, come on! Something's gotta be wrong! Trust me! I know! One time, my cousin, Valeria, accidently fell off her carriage and twisted her ankle. But, still, she told us she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
My coração rate increased, causing my coração monitor to start beeping erratically. Not at the sight of Cameron, but at the sight of Mercury.

Cameron must've noticed because he ran up to me and said, "Vanessa, calm down."

I kept my eyes on Mercury. "What's she doing here?"

"You should be greatful that I came to see you", Mercury said.

"Mercury..." Cameron turned to face me. "She drove me here."

"After he hit you, the police too his car away", Mercury said, grabbing my televisão vision remote and changing the channel.

"Hey!"

"Don't worry about the television, Vanessa." Cameron sat down on the sofá chair...
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posted by dexisawesome
Jed was running. Running from a dark figure a few feet behind. "You will never escape!", the dark figure from behind yelled. "yes I will", he thought. He ran and ran, until he reached the dark grey building in the middle of the field. He ran inside and slammed the iron door shut. A few bangs came from the other side, but they subsided quickly. He ran down the hidden staircase that was under a engradado, caixa in the small shack. He reached the bottom, and passed through the small passageway until he came to another door. He opened and entered the dimly lit room. Five other people were sitting around some...
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"No,no,no! Ponny, you're supposed to sound scared. like this, 'AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!'" Hilisia said. She said the line terrifiying. Ponya rolled her eyes. "If I say it any mais frighted, my eyes will pop out! And anyway, you're NOT the director. I'm doing it wrong when Mr.Figgsten says so." Ponya snapped back. "Ok girls, from the top!" The girls got ready. Then suddenly, Ponya stretched her arm out to Hilisia(Luci) And said, "Luci! LOOK OUT!" "What? What Brenda?" "AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!" "EEEEEEK!" "RUN!!!" They both said. Then the scene ended as they ran off stage. "Perfect!" Mr.Figgsten yelled. Huffing and puffing, the girls came offstage. "Hey you guys I know it's short notice, but we will have to shoot the rest of the film in New jersey
posted by hailieywithin
The amount of sleep I got was not alot. I was always getting awoken por visions of Emily with other guys. I loved her alot. But I am not obsessed with her only a crazy person would. With her eyes and hair and mouth. Fine I guess I am obsessed a little. But she wouldn't go away. The fight over and over again.
August 12,2011.
"hey Emily look at this"! Emily ran to the Kay jewelry store at gasped at the new shipments of sapphire diamonds. "there pretty aren't they"? I asked her as she gasped at the colors. She nodded this time looking at me. "just like you". I said. She smiled and we kissed on the...
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posted by hailieywithin
I glanced at my digital watch. 7:48. Exactly 2 hours atrás Emily my girlfriend of 1 ano broke up with me right as I was going to purpose. Occasionally Darla the sexy girl behind me would talk to me about collage. She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics. Darla was actually quite smart. She had a letters to 8 major collages. Then she would ask about my life. My dad died when I was 6 and my mom lost custody of me when I was 12. I quit sonhar acordado and prepared my things to get off at the nearest motel. We would take off again tomorrow. At about 5 minuets from a Red Inn Motel. As we...
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posted by hailieywithin
You pull up to you're moms house after getting abused por your father. You limp inside as she is on the sofá with vodka. "MOM"! you shout at she sees you looking at the bottle. "I'm so sorry-name-". She hugs you as you cringe because of a bruise on your arm. She is shocked when you tell her what happened. Quickly she calls the police and they arrest him and bring you for questioning. You break down in tears as you tell them you are sexually abused every week you are there. When you're father is put in jail for twenty years you believe you are at ease. Days after you fall down your stairs at...
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