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write a poem or some sad thing but IT HAS TO RHYME !

mine :
" Depression is when you hate everyone around
Depression is when you don't want to make a sound
Depression is when all you want to do is cry
Depression is when you feel like you’re dying inside
Depression is when your thoughts wonder all the time
Depression is when you can't sleep even though you’re tired
Depression is when you don't want to go on
Depression is when you can't stop shaking outside
Depression is when you hide who you are
Depression is when you put on a mask to hide what you feel
Depression is when you feel weak all the time
Depression is when you give in to everything around
Depression is when you don't care what happens anymore
and is just another dia in my life ... so lets take a faca ... "
 fanofzeldafan posted over a year ago
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FeelmySwagger said:
I feel weird in a world unknown
I pray to my savior in different a tone
how i hate living and just want to end it
but am still held back with accomplishing it
''ur just beginning'' he says
dont follow that outer voice astray
it leads to oblivion
i keep on opening like an onion
I find truth in His words
as i heal i feel their words like swords
poking me inside
still He will not leave me aside
i keep on rising and rising
and now I sing


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posted over a year ago 
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the sing thing was totally aleatório
FeelmySwagger posted over a year ago
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kk
4422 posted over a year ago
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*best answer*
4422 posted over a year ago
hobbit1121 said:
The dark ground is stained red
Where all the Valente soldiers bled
Their weapons were useless
The enemy was ruthless
All those tears were in vain
The men knew death was release from the pain
On their graves the poppies grow
And to this dia they still blow
The soldiers are at peace
As they knew the enemy's fogo did cease
To this dia we pray for them
And we know their souls are as priceless as gems
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posted over a year ago 
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Wow. That really was sad.
melidogs posted over a year ago
POPclogger216 said:
cachorros dying*
Kids lying**
Girlfriends crying***
I, myself sighing.****











































*Their pele, peles blue: It's the new brown.
**On the ground, laughing their heads off at a joke
***for joy, seeing that their boyfriend just proposed to them.
***** Because i can't make a sad poem to save my life.
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That was really funny! I can't write sad either. :)
melidogs posted over a year ago
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the same here :D
ItComesToThis posted over a year ago
melidogs said:
Birds fly up so gentle
like a feather on the breeze
Like the rain that falls so softly
like the snow up to my knees

What is their inspiration?
How do they find their soul?
And nothing but their smile
Is gonna make me whole.

Some dia I will do my best
While looking to the sky
I'll find my coração once hidden,
Grow my wings and fly.
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amor it:);):];] I also❤smilies!!!!
hobbit1121 posted over a year ago
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thanks! :D
melidogs posted over a year ago
4422 said:
Super sick
i hate the way i feel cos im sick
i cant eat, i cant drink my mouth stinks.
Mum force me to go eat,
but im not fit...
Crazy fever, when will u leave
wen its sunny u make me shake
my leg shake, my head aches
i cant think, im now thin
my eyes hurts n guess what
im now blind, i cant see wen u stand ..
So Dear God, i need my health back!

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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted over a year ago
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0_0 rubbish
4422 posted over a year ago
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i wrote rubbish
4422 posted over a year ago
Lady_Rebel said:
Bravery

Standing in the light
Looking at the night
What is your fright?
The feeling that my path is not right.

Do you keep going?

Standing still as the dead
Looking at the names of the dead
What do you dread?
I fear the fatality of death.

Do you continue?

When you are faced with the grave
And yes, off course in the night
And Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante with terror,
If you keep going through the fright
We will name you “brave”.

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not really sad...
Lady_Rebel posted over a year ago
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted over a year ago
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kk
4422 posted over a year ago
DarkCEpitome said:
Suddenly, the rod breaks and pierces her
Blood of my dreams splatters on the wall
The pieces of her hang in the air
Shards of her, where she looks out and stares
Watches her pieces dance all about
And when each little piece breaks off, the shard
shall give out a shout
Yes, the girl watches herself
She watches them all
Then briskly and briefly wonders
why the torn, broken pieces of her
strangely never fall...
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posted over a year ago 
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Sorry if it doesn't make too much sense....I just got over having writer's block, I'm slowly getting back to the whole turn of things :(
DarkCEpitome posted over a year ago
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted over a year ago
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That was cool
EvilPineapple posted over a year ago
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