---Chapter 1---
Hollyleafs eyes whent wide and claped her paws.
"E-e-eating g-g-good t-t-tonight"eyes titches as she drags a peixe from the river to the portected antro, den from teh flood the rats all whent around her and she hissed
"GET!!! GET!!!Hollystar eats first"chuckles evil as the rats run away she hade named everyone and she was leader of them she took a bite of the peixe swiping her tough over her jaws"Hollystar like!"Hollyleaf ate half of it than called one of the rats"ScarFace!"a larg rato the size of an aprentice walk to the rato and nibbled on it he hade scars on his face and all over and big fangs that where as sharp as claws.
"Y-y-yes e-e-eat u-u-up"eye twitches and calls the rest of the rats than stands up on you hind legs and claps her paws and dances"I'am a leader i'am a leader!I'am a-RUMBLEBELLY DONT HOG IT ALL!!!!!!!"she snarls"That doesent make HollyStar happy!"the rato hollyleaf seemed to be talking to backed off Hollyleaf hissed than bark she turned around and looked back no mais peixe was there she chuckled and claped again and twitched eye as she said"And soon we will get revenge on the clans"she coughed"And we will kill them all!!!"laughs evily and dances again the little gloom of light lies on her ragged dirty matted pele, peles her crazy eyes lay open the thousands of rats"And yo shall be my army!!"all the rats squicks"YOU WILL GET REVENGE ON THE gatos WHO TOOK YOUR PLACE!"they squill again and she laughs crazily and spins in circles and dances her eyes go cruz eyed and twitch"B-b-but first w-w-we need to find a way out SO G RATYS GO GO GO!!!!!"she lifts he paws up and ooks at the celing as thousands of rats run into every tunnel she turns her head and watches them"Hold on Squirrelflight and Leafpool m clans comming..."she smiles evily and walks deeper into the shadows thinking of Squirrelflights and Leafpools death.
NORMAL Mary sue.
Stereotypical Mary sue.
