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she sensed that something was wrong as she lifted her self of the travesseiro to look at me i lifted my head i needed to get my mood under control so i didn`t flip out.
"edward? what is it whats wrong?"
"you have to aske" my face maybe smooth but there was nothing i could do about my voise.
her face went blank as she thought there was many times that i had wonted to know what she was think and as her face started to crease with worrie this was defently one of thouse times sure she told me but i really did belive that she is editing it. hm.
my fingers started to smooth her fawhead.
!what are you thinking?"...

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Training was hard but incredibly fun much to mum and dad’s dislike. Kate had helped me like she had my mum and Emmet and Jasper were teaching me tactics.
“Okay Emmet, I’m ready to go again!” I called after he had managed to floor me for the sixteenth time. As I slipped into a low crouch I flashed Esme a huge grin, I had hardly got to spend any alone time with her since we arrived in Denali, what with the sadistic vampire and me being sedated....

Me and Bella are becoming like sisters. But it's hard to do anything when you're worried about your family. It's been three days since the incident with Aro. I wondered how long the peace would last. "Hey, Ariella. Do you wanna go out hunting with me?" Bella asked. "Um... sure, I guess." I replied. She gracefully bounded over the river. My leap was a little shaky. I ran topo, início speed through the woods, but Bella easily beat me. I closed my eyes and imagined everything could be like this. I ran into something that shouldn't have been there. The path was clear before. Bella screeched to a stop behind...