Here's a fifth chapter and it's from my most favorito character (Alice) point of view. Thanks to all who read and comment this story.
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutos later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days atrás she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times por kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about bebês past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to pergunta her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last segundo Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our início - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I amor you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was seguinte to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hora she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
Thanks for reading!
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutos later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days atrás she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times por kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about bebês past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to pergunta her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last segundo Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our início - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I amor you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was seguinte to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hora she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
Thanks for reading!
Last one for today. ^_^
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
I confuse Sunrise with
the Twilight
A Start Ends
an ending begins
She changed my life
my dead heartbeat
my Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante heart
She made them Hers
with her sweet flying heartbeat,
her honey gaze
she makes me amor Her face
and the moonlight does not compare Her
I want her Forever
not to mover on
to stay here, in the
Dead Moonlight
But I Can't
the sunrise came
and we have no choice back
P.S this time i tried as hard as i could!i work it from the morning!i hope you like it!it is a bit sad but it is the best i can do!
the Twilight
A Start Ends
an ending begins
She changed my life
my dead heartbeat
my Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante heart
She made them Hers
with her sweet flying heartbeat,
her honey gaze
she makes me amor Her face
and the moonlight does not compare Her
I want her Forever
not to mover on
to stay here, in the
Dead Moonlight
But I Can't
the sunrise came
and we have no choice back
P.S this time i tried as hard as i could!i work it from the morning!i hope you like it!it is a bit sad but it is the best i can do!
EDWARD'S ervilha COAT
''Everybody wants to know where his ervilha casaco came from!'' exclaims the costumer. Unfortunately, it is a one-of-a-kind piece (er, sort of: three to four were made for filming purposes) which Chuck herself crafted after not being able to find the perfect one. ''We needed the right fit, [and] I couldn't find anything in the right shade of gray,'' she recalls. ''Catherine [Hardwicke, the director] is really big on back story for her characters and anything that can help that, even if it's in a texture or color of clothes.'' After considering ''probably 20 swatches,'' Chuck went with one from Mood Fabrics and based her final design on a combination of other styles of ervilha coats. In the end, his turned out as ''a classic shape with a modern twist.''
''Everybody wants to know where his ervilha casaco came from!'' exclaims the costumer. Unfortunately, it is a one-of-a-kind piece (er, sort of: three to four were made for filming purposes) which Chuck herself crafted after not being able to find the perfect one. ''We needed the right fit, [and] I couldn't find anything in the right shade of gray,'' she recalls. ''Catherine [Hardwicke, the director] is really big on back story for her characters and anything that can help that, even if it's in a texture or color of clothes.'' After considering ''probably 20 swatches,'' Chuck went with one from Mood Fabrics and based her final design on a combination of other styles of ervilha coats. In the end, his turned out as ''a classic shape with a modern twist.''
The Couples
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be posted soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so you understood what was happening .Please tell me if you think it is good.
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be posted soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so you understood what was happening .Please tell me if you think it is good.
These are the rest of the characters.
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The seguinte one will be the family and friends.
I will make the seguinte one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The seguinte one will be the family and friends.
I will make the seguinte one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10. Ask about Mike.
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that you and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her you are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that you and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her you are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
thanks for leitura im really new at this as some of guys can tell