Here's a fifth chapter and it's from my most favorito character (Alice) point of view. Thanks to all who read and comment this story.
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutos later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days atrás she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times por kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about bebês past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to pergunta her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last segundo Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our início - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I amor you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was seguinte to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hora she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
Thanks for reading!
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5th chapter Hiding
Alice
"It's already morning" I whispered to Jasper trying to free myself from his embrace but he ignored and continued kissing. "You know, we have adorable tiny girl whom we adopted and I don't think it's nice to keep her waiting".
"I know..." he sighed "But she's not wake now so we still have some time we can use..." he smiled and I gave up.
Five minutos later I heard how Jalley got up. She started running down the stairs and on the halfway jumped gracefully straight to Jasper's arms.
"Good morning, Miss" he said swaying her.
"Morning" she replied shyly and hugged his neck. For a moment I couldn't do anything else besides smiling and admiring this lovely scene. Three days atrás she said in the same shy tone that she loved me. And yesterday she whispered these words to Jasper. I thought I'm gonna explode from happiness - my girl accepted us as parents!
"What do you want to do today?" Jasper asked tickling her belly.
"I, I don't know" she was laughing and trying to hide behind my back.
"Alice?"
I closed my eyes and froze for a second. A sigh escaped from my lips - I couldn't see future with four half-vampires in family clearly but I could guess.
"Soccer match, I think. Four teams: Emmett, Rose and Emi against us three and Carlisle, Esme, Nick against Edward, Bella and Nessie"
"Awesome!" he exclaimed and started chasing Jalley around the house. Even if wouldn't have an ability to see future, I could predict one thing for sure. Emmett and Jasper always loved to compete against each other but now their competition entered completely new level. Or better say, proud fathers level. I think I already hear them boasting "My princess is faster" "But my girl fights better" "Emi learned to read five days ago" "Jalley did that a week ago" "It's because she's older" "Or because she's smarter.... Everyday the same.
"Do you think Edward is ready to play? He was beaten two times por kids after all" Jasper grinned and interrupted my thoughts.
"Oh, he'll definitely play" I assured him. And that reminded me our conversation yesterday. Edward was really curious about bebês past. Nessie could remember her birth, so probably they could remember too but when we asked Nick and Emi what they can tell about themselves, they said the only memory is the darkness and the feeling being carried. And then we came into the picture. With Jalley everything was different. And her nightmares made wonder what she has suffered. I couldn't ask her at first cause she didn't spoke a word but now she was talking, laughing, playing and even loved us. Edward pushed me to pergunta her. Maybe today I should? I looked at Jalley on Jasper's back and decided to wait until the match will be over.
Apparently, I was a bit wrong about opponents - our team played with Edward, Bella and Nessie while Emmett could demonstrate his skills to Carlisle's team. We didn't leave any chances to Edward and Emmett also won so it was decided to arrange Grand finale. The match was amazing - Emi was faster then Jalley, but my girl was trickier. Emmett and Jasper almost kicked off their legs trying to get a ball and I had to face Rosalie who also wasn't in a mood of losing. The results changed very quickly so it was impossible to predict the ending. Finally, the last segundo Jasper passed ball to Jalley and GOAL! We won! Emmett whined all the way that we cheated.
When we reached our início - now we all were living in separate houses near each other, it was dark. Jasper carried sleepy Jalley upstairs and I followed them trying to find words to start my interrogation.
"Uhm... Jalley?" I sat on the corner of her bed. "Can I ask you something?"
"Sure" she whispered putting her head on the pillow. She looked so tired and so cute this moment that I wavered if I should continue.
"Sweetie, you know how much I amor you, but there are some things I would like to know..." I paused.
"Uhm..." her eyes were closed.
"Honey, can you remember anything from you past? From your life before coming here?" I watched her eyes flew open filled with fear and I wanted to bite off my tongue. "Sweetie, I'm sorry. You don't have to talk if you don't want to.
"No, it's fine..." her voice was shaking. "I can remember... I can... The darkness. Yes, it was dark. My eyes were closed. I was so scared" her body start shaking and I could see her tears. I wanted to stop her but she continued "I was carried. Emi and Nick was seguinte to me. I was so scared that I didn't open my eyes". Now she was sobbing and I hugged her. After an hora she fell asleep and I went downstairs. Her story was the same as Nick's or Emi's but none of them reacted like this. I knew she was lying.
"Alice, why did you asked her that?" Jasper was looking at me concerned. I knew he's gonna be angry if I mention Edward so I did the same thing Jalley just did. I lied.
"I can't see her future. What if her father will appear and take away her from us?"
"Oh, Alice..." he hugged me around the waist and pulled closer. "I'm not letting anyone to hurt you or Jalley. She's ours. Nothing won't change that" and he kissed me. I smiled - right now I was sure that we'll have our girl forever.
Thanks for reading!
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if you have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the seguinte one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back seguinte to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back seguinte to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
'Twilight': Which 'New Moon' scene should debut on the mtv Movie Awards?
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | por Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's mtv Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The pergunta is: Which one do you most want to see? If you haven't read the segundo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- or Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lobo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | por Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's mtv Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The pergunta is: Which one do you most want to see? If you haven't read the segundo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- or Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lobo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.