Thank you for leitura the 1st chapter...here's the second, I hope you enjoy and PLEASE comment!!!
Rosalie's POV
After Edward left I darted deeper into the woods beyond the clearing. There were bears around, I cheirado, cheirava, smelt them. I continued a little deeper into the woods until one of them came into view. I bent down into a crouch and struck at a cub that was in front of me. After I was done with the cub, I heard a scream of agony coming from straight ahead. I followed the sound until I came to a small clearing no bigger than a dorm room at college. In the clearing I saw another bear, probably the mother of the cub, attacking a person. I ran to him when the urso was backing up to attack again. He looked up at me and asked, "Are you an angel?"
I smiled at him. I felt something in that moment, I knew I had to save him. I charged at the urso as it was heading back towards him. I threw it on the ground and tried to sink my teeth in its throat, but the urso was to strong and it threw me off against a árvore on the opposite side of the clearing. I got up immediately and cut of the bear's path to the boy. I crouched down and pounced at the bear. I took its neck between my hands and twisted it, I sunk my teeth in its neck and felt the warm blood flow down my throat.
I ran back to my stranger, he was drifting to and from conscientiousness. I picked him up in my arms and he moaned in pain. "Shh, everything will be ok." I told him soothingly.
I began to run as fast as I could back to the house. When I believed I was close enough for Edward to hear my thoughts I began shouting his name in my head telling him I need help. I continued to run, my stranger looked up at me again. His eyes showed pain but his face still reminded me of Henry, Vera's son, my best friend before I was a vampire.
The house came into view and I started to yell, "Carlisle father, Edward, Esme mother help me please." I stepped out of the woods carrying the stranger and I saw my family standing on the porch with confused looks on their faces.
Rosalie's POV
After Edward left I darted deeper into the woods beyond the clearing. There were bears around, I cheirado, cheirava, smelt them. I continued a little deeper into the woods until one of them came into view. I bent down into a crouch and struck at a cub that was in front of me. After I was done with the cub, I heard a scream of agony coming from straight ahead. I followed the sound until I came to a small clearing no bigger than a dorm room at college. In the clearing I saw another bear, probably the mother of the cub, attacking a person. I ran to him when the urso was backing up to attack again. He looked up at me and asked, "Are you an angel?"
I smiled at him. I felt something in that moment, I knew I had to save him. I charged at the urso as it was heading back towards him. I threw it on the ground and tried to sink my teeth in its throat, but the urso was to strong and it threw me off against a árvore on the opposite side of the clearing. I got up immediately and cut of the bear's path to the boy. I crouched down and pounced at the bear. I took its neck between my hands and twisted it, I sunk my teeth in its neck and felt the warm blood flow down my throat.
I ran back to my stranger, he was drifting to and from conscientiousness. I picked him up in my arms and he moaned in pain. "Shh, everything will be ok." I told him soothingly.
I began to run as fast as I could back to the house. When I believed I was close enough for Edward to hear my thoughts I began shouting his name in my head telling him I need help. I continued to run, my stranger looked up at me again. His eyes showed pain but his face still reminded me of Henry, Vera's son, my best friend before I was a vampire.
The house came into view and I started to yell, "Carlisle father, Edward, Esme mother help me please." I stepped out of the woods carrying the stranger and I saw my family standing on the porch with confused looks on their faces.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant raio, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant raio, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant raio, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
escrivaninha, mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulância arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant raio, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant raio, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant raio, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant raio, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
escrivaninha, mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulância arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant raio, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after leitura all four books I feel in amor with them. I wasn't a fã of the composição literária style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in amor with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I amor the ending to Breaking Dawn. And amor New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to amor HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before leitura Twilight...and just suddenly realized my composição literária was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm composição literária a vampire novel that I hope to publicar in the near future.
But after leitura all four books I feel in amor with them. I wasn't a fã of the composição literária style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in amor with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I amor the ending to Breaking Dawn. And amor New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to amor HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before leitura Twilight...and just suddenly realized my composição literária was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm composição literária a vampire novel that I hope to publicar in the near future.