Okay so I have written a story similar to this. Same concept just mais different. The other story I posted was/is on fanfiction.net I wrote that story years atrás and now looking back at it, I want to change it up and fix my grammar and what not. This story picks up right after new moon before eclipse. No Victoria battle, no beijar Jake, no marriage, no Renesmee, at least idk yet. (; Enjoy. Review. Please.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, mais pain then they ever imagined. She turns into the enemy of both Jacob and Edward? How will life change? How will everyone cope? How long til the world comes crashing down? :O!
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Chapter 1.
The shrill of my alarm woke me out of my deep sleep. I lazily got up out of cama and went to the bathroom to get a shower. I started the water and got undressed. I hopped into the chuveiro and washed myself up. When I was done I grabbed my towel from off the hook and wrapped it around my wet naked body. I ran my hand over the fogged up mirror so I could see my face.
I picked up my clothes off the back of the toilet and started to get changed. I'm not the girl who likes make up. I'm all natural. I smiled at myself in the mirror and wrapped my hair up in the towel. I pulled my pants up and buttoned them as I heard the slight "thump" coming from my room. Edward is here. I exited the bathroom while pulling my camisa over my head.
"Good morning, love." Edward said coming over and pecking me on the lips. Immediately I blushes at his little nickname he gave me. Every time he calls me 'love' the borboletas soar in my stomach.
I giggled softly before tip toeing and beijar his cheek back. "Good morning." I crossed the room and put my dirty clothes in my hamper. Edward said on my cama and I came over and plopped myself seguinte to him. My stomach growled as I landed on the cama making Edward scowl at me.
The blush rushed to my face as fast as it normally does. Edward stood up picking me us as well. I squealed as he carried me bridal style down the stairs and into my kitchen. These were the times when I was grateful Charlie was at work early this morning. I wouldn't of been able to explain why Edward was in my room when he never walked through my door.
Edward had sat my on the counter as he pulled out a pan and placed it on the stove. "Eggs okay for you?" He asked sheepishly.
"Of course, I'll eat anything you make for me." I stated the truth.
Edward smiled smugly and went to the fridge to grab the eggs. It only took him a few minutos tops to scramble the eggs and cook them. In no time, the was a plate set on my lap and I began eating contently. After I finished eating, Edward took the plate from me and placed it in the sink as I hopped down from the counter. "Ready?" He asked picking up my bag.
Wiping my hands on my jeans I nodded and headed towards the door. We drive to school in silence. It was a comfortable silence. There was nothing awkward about it. His hand rested on topo, início of mine and drew soothing circles on the back on my hand. I smiled softly at him. Eventually we reached the school parking lot and found our parking spot seguinte to the rest of the Cullen's.
Edward, being the gentleman that he is, got out of the car and came and opened my car door for me. I stepped out of the Volvo and settled closed to Edwards side. Senior ano and still him and I receive the stares. I couldn't help but blush making Edward snicker. "Let's get to class, love." He said brushing his lips against my ear making me blush even more.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, mais pain then they ever imagined. She turns into the enemy of both Jacob and Edward? How will life change? How will everyone cope? How long til the world comes crashing down? :O!
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Chapter 1.
The shrill of my alarm woke me out of my deep sleep. I lazily got up out of cama and went to the bathroom to get a shower. I started the water and got undressed. I hopped into the chuveiro and washed myself up. When I was done I grabbed my towel from off the hook and wrapped it around my wet naked body. I ran my hand over the fogged up mirror so I could see my face.
I picked up my clothes off the back of the toilet and started to get changed. I'm not the girl who likes make up. I'm all natural. I smiled at myself in the mirror and wrapped my hair up in the towel. I pulled my pants up and buttoned them as I heard the slight "thump" coming from my room. Edward is here. I exited the bathroom while pulling my camisa over my head.
"Good morning, love." Edward said coming over and pecking me on the lips. Immediately I blushes at his little nickname he gave me. Every time he calls me 'love' the borboletas soar in my stomach.
I giggled softly before tip toeing and beijar his cheek back. "Good morning." I crossed the room and put my dirty clothes in my hamper. Edward said on my cama and I came over and plopped myself seguinte to him. My stomach growled as I landed on the cama making Edward scowl at me.
The blush rushed to my face as fast as it normally does. Edward stood up picking me us as well. I squealed as he carried me bridal style down the stairs and into my kitchen. These were the times when I was grateful Charlie was at work early this morning. I wouldn't of been able to explain why Edward was in my room when he never walked through my door.
Edward had sat my on the counter as he pulled out a pan and placed it on the stove. "Eggs okay for you?" He asked sheepishly.
"Of course, I'll eat anything you make for me." I stated the truth.
Edward smiled smugly and went to the fridge to grab the eggs. It only took him a few minutos tops to scramble the eggs and cook them. In no time, the was a plate set on my lap and I began eating contently. After I finished eating, Edward took the plate from me and placed it in the sink as I hopped down from the counter. "Ready?" He asked picking up my bag.
Wiping my hands on my jeans I nodded and headed towards the door. We drive to school in silence. It was a comfortable silence. There was nothing awkward about it. His hand rested on topo, início of mine and drew soothing circles on the back on my hand. I smiled softly at him. Eventually we reached the school parking lot and found our parking spot seguinte to the rest of the Cullen's.
Edward, being the gentleman that he is, got out of the car and came and opened my car door for me. I stepped out of the Volvo and settled closed to Edwards side. Senior ano and still him and I receive the stares. I couldn't help but blush making Edward snicker. "Let's get to class, love." He said brushing his lips against my ear making me blush even more.
Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie you know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... or with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" or "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" or "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude comments about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a aleatório piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a aleatório piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
