line art Gwen and Trent

[b]I would like you to give me your honest opinion of this.[b]

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"Bentley?" An older male inquired across his cell to his new cell mate. The boy, Bentley, was no older than twenty. He was sitting on the floor when the older male called to him. Moving his ebony black hair aside, coal grey eyes looked up innocently.

"Yes, Johnson?" He replied to the other.

"Have you ever heard of the series called Total Drama?" Johnson smirked as Bentley's eyes lit up like a natal tree.

"I loved that show!" He gushed, his lithe body curling up slightly in anticipation. "Why do you ask?"

"Would...

For a while now i have been watching people fight over three characters.And when I kept thinking how stupid it was to just start an internet war about these three characters.Will I'm here to tell you what makes a good character in my book which means I'm making a list like I always do.

5.The look of a character. I didn't put this too high for a lot of reasons number one mais than half the time no one really cares about it.number two a lot of people can be tricked that a character is cute cause how much they like the character. Take Duncan for a example.Cause of this it makes it to the number...