Hello darlings. This is my FIRST story that I have written in english. I tried my best spelling errors were corrected, but I'm only 13, so I do not know very much about english, yet. However, I hope that you would tell me any errors, what i have in this story. This is also my first story here, so can you put comments, what you think about this story/chapter, Thank you.
Chapter 1: Realising
Flora sat on the toilet , holding a pregnancy test, which was blinking 2 red lines. Flora stared at the lines in horror . She was too young for that . And she was already in 3 month!...
oi everyone, This is my very first fã fiction so don't expect from me to make it perfect. In this fã fiction I'll include both shows Winx Club and W.I.T.C.H. In this fã fiction the Winx will meet W.I.T.C.H. and together they will go through a lot of adventures. They will face many villains (I'll include villains from both shows but I might as well include other villains which are not from the shows) and many problems too. Both Winx and W.I.T.C.H will get new transformations. I also might include other things. But for now this. :) So, I hope you like it!
This idea just came to me. If I miss any out feel free to comment and tell me. I'll be doing main characters and main minor characters, if you know what I mean :p. Ok so lets get started.
Bloom - Mary-Sue
As much as amor Bloom, and I do she one of my favorito characters, I kind of have to agree on that she is a Mary-Sue. Practically everything does come to her with little or no work but I do amor her never give up attitude.
Stella - Fashionista
You probably saw this one coming as it it pretty obvious, she is the blonde princess into fashion. There's one in every show, but I wish they made her slightly...