Os Heróis do Olimpo The de praia, praia ( High school)

SeaBrat posted on Dec 05, 2011 at 02:17AM
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over a year ago parras2 said…
meh
^^well that was.... random
over a year ago tracytracy2000 said…
laugh
hey if you haven't heard My friend and I are starting a fanfic contest With categories such as best grammar, best humor, and many others. I started reading your fanfic and its pretty interesting. I was wondering if you'd like to enter your fanfic
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over a year ago tracytracy2000 said…
cool
Hey if you haven't heard My friend and I are starting a fanfic contest With categories such as best grammar, best humor, and many others. I started reading your fanfic and its pretty interesting. I was wondering if you'd like to enter your fanfic
All you need to know about it:link
over a year ago mynameis67 said…
interesting i will follow this and maybe percy has a girlfriend or maybe annabeths hallucinating or both? also first chapter he thinks rachels ugly lol
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
smile
Its on the pc!!
over a year ago perceus121 said…
link to my story plzz read it

link
over a year ago mynameis67 said…
I definitly believe that annabeth is hallucinating
over a year ago pugluv98 said…
when are you goig to post?
over a year ago percabeth-bcz7 said…
^yeah.. :( you said you would post 4 days ago :(
PLEASE POST SOON!!!!!

oh yeah ;)i started the 10th page ;) :)
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over a year ago pugluv98 said…
post! this made popular content!
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
big smile
Sorry for being so late! Was in Bora Bora. :D
over a year ago pugluv98 said…
your apology will only be accepted when you post!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
big smile
Post soon great story
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
sick
Aaaaahhhh! Another chapter deleted from the iPod! Mental breakdown! I'm sorry!


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over a year ago pugluv98 said…
um, its just a song
over a year ago universalpowa said…
^ no realli? *sarcasm*
i thought it was a play...

JK!!!

hope u can post soon...
and u should try google docs, it saves everything
all u need is a google account! :D
over a year ago JosephineSilver said…
Wow, this story rox.
love the idea of them being normal teens.
over a year ago periana4ever said…
post soon ur amazing
over a year ago swimmergirl7 said…
Universal@ love ur sarcasm!
Seabrat@ nice...song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or chappie or whatever!!
over a year ago crazypegesus980 said…
POSSSTTTT PLEASE
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Will post ASAP! Have alot to do tomorrow
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
meh
Ok.
over a year ago pugluv98 said…
sweetness
over a year ago crazypegesus980 said…
is she posting today(friday in the USA)??
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
This little part happened today in real life to me, awkward...
" Annabeth? Are you dating Percy?" Collette's eyes sparkled with curiosity.
" Well...." I truly didn't know.
" But I guess since he left, the term would be WAS dating," she raised a brow.
" I...."
" But hey, you can move on right?" Collette interrupted.
" I...."
" I mean he is just one guy right,"
" Your..."
" Even if he had a total eight pack and perfect body, unruly tussled wind blown raven hair, even nose, smooth granite glass like pale beautiful skin, a nice hard strong straight jaw, totally sexy voice, and eyes of the sea that mesmerize you until you melt and how they show so many mixed emotions, and how they are like large green emerald jems or orbs of total gorgeousness, and smelled amazing like Benton and like Seascape or Aqua de Gio and a bit salty, and perfect pink lips that were almost pouty and you just wanted to smash your lips to his forever and make out with them for eternity and do the dance with no pants, oh! And he can play the guitar, sing, and a model, but you know...."
" Collette! Shut up!" I threw my hands went up into the air.
" I went overboard didn't I?" Collette blushed, put smiled widely.
" Just a little," Alice grinned.
" Ooooooouuuuu! Oooouuuu! Ooooouuu!" Collette jumped up suddenly and waved her hands down in a dripping motion. " I brought my iPod! It has the radio on it!" she took it from her pocket and quickly tuned into the next song

When you were here before
Couldn't look you in the eye
You're just like an angel
Your skin makes me cry
You float like a feather
In a beautiful world
I wish I was special
You're so fucking special
But I 'm a creep
I 'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here

I don't care if it hurts
I want to have control
I want a perfect body
I want a perfect soul
I want you to notice
When I'm not around
You're so fucking special
I wish I was special

But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here

She's running out again
She's running out
She run, run, run run
Run

Whatever makes you happy
Whatever you want
You're so fucking special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here
I don't belong here.
But I 'm a creep
I 'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here

I don't care if it hurts
I want to have control
I want a perfect body
I want a perfect soul
I want you to notice
When I'm not around
You're so fucking special
I wish I was special

But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here

She's running out again
She's running out
She run, run, run run
Run

Whatever makes you happy
Whatever you want
You're so fucking special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong here
I don't belong here.

" That was sang to us from Mr. Percy Jackson!" her voice was southern, the annoying type that you want to get rid of after 5 minutes. A creep? Are you kidding me?! He was amazing! He had a perfect body! He had a perfect soul! Ahhh! I was so furious! At a song, I was mad at a song. Even if it was a song, something told me it was a true song.

If you ever leave me baby,
Leave some morphine at my door
‘Cause it would take a whole lot of medication
To realize what we used to have,
We don’t have it anymore.

There’s no religion that could save me
No matter how long my knees are on the floor
So keep in mind all the sacrifices I’m makin’
Will keep you by my side
Will keep you from walkin’ out the door.

[Chorus]
Cause there’ll be no sunlight
If I lose you, baby
There’ll be no clear skies
If I lose you, baby
Just like the clouds
My eyes will do the same, if you walk away
Everyday it will rain, rain, rain...

I’ll never be your mother’s favorite
Your daddy can’t even look me in the eye
Oooh if I was in their shoes, I’d be doing the same thing
Sayin there goes my little girl
Walkin’ with that troublesome guy

But they’re just afraid of something they can’t understandk

Oooh well little darlin’ watch me change their minds
Yeah for you I’ll try I’ll try I’ll try I’ll try
I’ll pick up these broken pieces ’til I’m bleeding
If that’ll make you mine

[Chorus]
Cause there’ll be no sunlight
If I lose you, baby
There’ll be no clear skies
If I lose you, baby
Just like the clouds
My eyes will do the same if you walk away
Everyday it will rain, rain, rain...

[Bridge]
Don’t just say, goodbye
Don’t just say, goodbye
I’ll pick up these broken pieces ’til I’m bleeding
If that’ll make it right

[Chorus]
Cause there’ll be no sunlight
If I lose you, baby
There’ll be no clear skies
If I lose you, baby
Just like the clouds
My eyes will do the same if you walk away
Everyday it will rain, rain, rain...

By then I started to cry.



A new day
I currently attend Harvard university to major in Architecture. I was a 21 year old, sophisticated young woman. It was July and the sun was high in the sky as I layed my towel on the sand. I put on my sunglasses and took off my sundress to reveal my grey bikini, I applied my sunscreen and started reading my favorite novel.
" Duuuuudddde, check it out," a guy with long blonde hair called out. He was sunburnt and had a hemp bracelet around his ankle, his hair was bleach blonde and was so long it covered his mouth, his swimsuit had a bunch of smiling fish with Afros, odd? Yes. I noticed his peeling fingers point out toward the Atlantic ocean.
" That's totally NARLY MAN!" his voice was deep and lazy.
" broody I want a board like that man," another surfer said.
" he is totally boss," said another.
" He is HOT!" a raspy voice shouted. The girl had brown pouty lips, black Afro, deep brown skin, and black eyes.
" I saw him first," a voice stated. She had wild blonde hair up in a bun, the tips tyed blue, her hazel eyes narrowed at the other girl.
" No way Amy," the dark toned girl placed her hands at her waist, sticking her hip out.
" I did Lafaundauh," Amy crossed her arms squishing her large bosoms.
" Oh great not again," another voice said. She had deep black eyes, brown/ black silky elbow length hair, tan skin, almond shaped eyes, rounded face, long black eyelashes, toned long muscular legs, and quite large arms. When she crossed her arms, you could see each muscle in her arm as she rolled her eyes at the girls. Her pink large lips dipped in a hard line. I couldn't tell if she was asian, because she didn't have squinty eyes, maybe Italian? Greek? Native American? Eskimo?
" It's nothing Cami, Amy said embarrassed.
" Suuuuurrrreee," Cami said. She was beautiful.
" Woah," Lafaundauh said. I turned and watched a male surf his way to shore, he was extraordinary.
" He is really good," Cami said.
" He is," I agreed with her.
" Who are you Blondie?" Lafaundauh asked me.
" Annabeth,"
" I'm Amy," Amy giggled.
" Cami, life gaurd," she waved.
" You know who I am," Laufaundauh stuck a hand on her hip.
" Hey guys," a girl came up to us. " OMG! Annabeth!" she wrapped me in a warm embrace.
" Collette!" I smiled.
" What are you doing here?"
" Well I go to Harvard university, what about you?"
" My mom lived here and I decided to go to college here,"
" Oh really?"
" Ya plus my boyfriend lives here, I met him up at college," Collette beamed her eyes swirling with dark green and platinum grey.
" What is his name?" I asked her.
" Hey guys," a male voice called out.
" Justin!" Collette shouted.
" Is that your boyfriend?" Cami asked.
" Paaaaaallleeeeaaaasssssse! No way," Collette rolled her eyes.
" A friend?" I guessed.
" What are you guys talking about?" Justin asked.
" Nothing...." Collette whined.
" Hey Justin," Amy waved.
" Woah Woah Woah! Don't forget me ladies!" another boy came running down the beach with a red head.
" Was up ladies?" he had blonde Justin Beiber styled hair and grape colored irises.
" Kyle!" all the girls rolled their eyes.
" Can't you control yourself?" the red head asked. She had silky red hair to the middle of her back, she was thin but had large breasts and her blue eyes glittered in the sun.
" Never!" Kyle whispered loudly.
" Oh great Kyle is here," a melidous voice sighed.
" I was here first!" another voice said appalled.
" No way Kit kat!" a boy snorted.
" Wait up dudes!" yet another yelled.
" Shut up Hunter!" a different girl shouted.
" who are they?" I asked Cami.
" Nice one Percy!" Kyle shouted. Percy?
" Hey guys," a familiar husky voice almost purred.
" Will some one introduce you all?" Lafaundauh huffed.
" Ok then," Kyle said as his eyes widened. " This is Alice," he kissed the red head, she slapped him. " Justin," he pointed to him, he was over 6 feet with black spiky hair, tan skin, 8 pack and electric blue eyes. " Liam," he pointed to a boy with blond hair that was short and close to his head with blue eyes and a 10 pack. " Hunter," he pointed to a kid with black hair and warm brown eyes, he had a white t-shirt on. Why made me laugh was that his hair was like a bunch of needles sprouting from his head. " That is Mina," he gestured toward a girl with long brown hair and violet eyes. "Vera," he pointed toward a girl with long black hair to her elbows, she was 6'5, big breasted, seagreen eyed girl who apparently hated Kyle. " Kitty," he said to a girl who was short, skinny, brown haired girl with wild brown eyes. " Percy," he said to him as he came up to us with his surf board in his hand.
" I'm Cami," she introduced herself.
" Amy," she smiled.
" Annabeth," I said.
" Lafaundauh," she put a hand on her hip.
For the rest of the day I hung out with Collette, Cami, Amy, Lafaundauh, Hunter, Mina,Justin, Kyle, Liam, Vera, Alice, Kitty, and......Percy. We were all leaving when he came up to me.
" Do I know you from somewhere?" he asked. Luckily I had my sunglasses on so he couldn't tell who I was, but I was so shocked that my lips failed to respond.
" Ummmm.... See ya," he saluted and walked off, his muscular bare back facing me until he drove off in his Lamborghini and left me alone.

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over a year ago Kaia143 said…
big smile
Yeah u posted!!!!!!
over a year ago parras2 said…
big smile
awesome chappi
over a year ago pugluv98 said…
cool, you posted
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
smile
I will finish!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
Ok.
over a year ago crazypegesus980 said…
finish please....ur killing me with suspense

over a year ago venus143 said…
post soon can't whait till you do:)
over a year ago me-demigod4life said…
heart
I finally caught up to the story! I love it,Percy has to be the guy that was surfing! Also,Percy and Annabeth have to get back together. They are such a cute couple !!
over a year ago horse22133454 said…
big smile
luv it post soon
over a year ago itsjustamonster said…
big smile
i love your story post soon!!!!!!!!
over a year ago crazypegesus980 said…
cant wait for the next post hurry please
over a year ago me-demigod4life said…
big smile
Please post. Love chappi! Percy has to be the guy that was surfing. Percy and Annabeth should get back together.
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Sorry u haven't been posting. My internet was screwed :(
Will finish
over a year ago shubham06 said…
As has been said before
Apologies are accepted only when u POST
So POST SOOON!!!!
over a year ago me-demigod4life said…
So when will you post?
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Finished! Ok Vera, Alice, and Mina are models along with Justin Liam and Percy, that is how they met. Kitty and Collette go to the same college plus Kyle, and the crew hang out all the time.
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Annabeth

Fell in love with a boy
I fell in love once and almost completely
He's in love with the world
And sometimes these feelings can be so misleading
He turns and says, "Are you alright?"
Oh, I must be fine cause my heart's still beating
Come and kiss me by the riverside,
Sarah says it's cool, she don't consider it cheating

Oooh ooh ooh [x4]

Red hair with a curl
Mellow roll for the flavor and the eyes were peepin
Can't keep away from the boy
The two sides of my brain need to have a meeting
Can't think of anything to do
My left brain knows all of love is fleeting
He's just lookin for somethin new
I said it once before but it bears repeating

Oooh oooh ooh [x4]

Can't think of anything to do
My left brain knows all of love is fleeting
He's just lookin for somethin new
I said it once before but it bears repeating

Oooh oooh ooh [x4]

Fell in love with a boy
I fell in love once and almost completely
He's in love with the world and sometimes these feelings can be so misleading
He turns and says, "Are you alright?"
Oh, I must be fine cause my heart's still beating
Come and kiss me by the riverside
Sarah says it's cool, she don't consider it cheating, oh

Don't go telling no more
Don't go telling no more
Don't go telling no more lies on Sarah
Don't go telling no more
Don't go telling no more
Don't go telling no more lies on Sarah

Ooooh oooh oooh [x4]

Can't think of anything to do
My left brain knows all of love is fleeting
He's just looking for something new
I said it once before but it bears repeating

Oooh oooh oooh [x4]

Gonna tell you what's on my mind
I'm gonna tell you what's on my mind
Cause it bears repeating

It was hard not to think about Percy. My new friends only talked about him, he was in magazines, tv, the radio, I could never get his voice out of my head. I couldn't get his face off if my mind. I couldn't forget how his lips felt 3 years ago. He texted me once and asked how I was doing, I didn't respond. He left messages and. His voice was intoxicating, but I never returned the calls. Vera was almost like him it was hard to around her. She always crinkled up her nose like he did, her eyebrows furrowed together when she was thinking, her lips always dipped down into a pout like she was deep in thought. Then she was 6'5 an inch taller than him, her beautiful pale pearly skin, raven dark hair, long thick lashes, perfect lips, toned body, and enchanting green eyes made her impossible to look at. Her voice was deep raspy and husky like Etta James, or Adele, or Joss Stone, impossible to forget. I tried to focus on the conversation she was having with Alice, but I couldn't. He was alway on my mind. How does he just pop up from time to time everywhere I go? It was Percy, and he was a mystery. Maybe he was a hallucination. I think he is
over a year ago parras2 said…
worried
is annabeth sitting in a padded room with a straight jacket on aka crazy
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over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Haha that would be interesting wouldn't it. I won't finish till I got more reviews
over a year ago universalpowa said…
lol
post soon!!
and annabeth, silly
of course your hallucinating!
XD
post soon!!! :D
over a year ago venus143 said…
plz post soon great chapter:)
over a year ago AnnabethGranger said…
kiss
POST! I love your story sooo much! its so sweet how he is still constantly on her mind! Can you do a percy pov or maybs her friends to see their reactions to the way she acts and stuff! idk just an idea but yess dont ever stop posting i love it!
over a year ago Kaia143 said…
heart
Love the chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago me-demigod4life said…
Love chappi. Post soon.
over a year ago SeaBrat said…
Oooooooooohhh AnnabethGranger I like that idea! Will do!
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