Can you guys read my story and tell me if you like it, what to change and all that stuff, please?
Thantos was sitting on his bed, continuously throwing and catching his blue foam ball, with his headphones in his ears and música playing too loud and combing his medium length black hair out of his bright abnormally coloured eyes.
“This is so pointless. I need something better to do,” he said, scratching his extremely pale skin.
Thantos paused his IPod to hear a scream and girls laughing.
“What the- what was that about?” He asked himself, getting up from his cama and walking to his door.
“I’ll never know if I don’t go check it out,” he smiled.
Thantos walked down his stairs and toward his door and covered his ears as the girls screamed again.
He opened his front door to see a beautiful girl in a solid black bikini and another girl in a purple and rosa, -de-rosa strapless one piece.
“What’s all the screaming about?” Thantos yelled at them, laughing.
The girls screamed, looked at Thantos, then started laughing at there foolishness.
“First tell us who you are, then we’ll tell you why we were screaming,” laughed the girl in the one-piece.
“I’ll tell you who I am after you tell me who you are,” Thantos smirked at them.
The two girls looked at each other and smiled.
Both girls held out there left arm, palms flat facing him. Out of nowhere, water came shooting at Thantos, hitting him painfully hard.
“What was that for?” Thantos yelled, clenching his fists, angrily. “And how the hell did you do that?”
“Because we could. Isn’t that a total ‘duh’ factor?” The girl in the bikini asked.
“And how we did it is none of your damn business.” The other girl scolded.
“Just tell me who you are,” Thantos said, attempting to breathe calmly and not show his anger, but failing, miserably.
“My name is of no concern right now but… I might be willing to tell you if you tell me yours. We’ll tell you why we were screaming and both of our na