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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude comments :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story por :YoshiStar
One dia when I was at least 2 or 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the grama and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a grama snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some morango ice cream...

Please tell me what you think. Should I continue or no? And please no rude comments:)
 YoshiStar posted over a year ago
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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posted over a year ago 
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Thank you for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, you could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted over a year ago
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thank you sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
JudyNails said:
I think you should!
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
Shadowmarioking said:
lol that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if you can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
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You are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted over a year ago
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted over a year ago
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Well its kinda mais like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted over a year ago
dreamfields said:
If you enjoy writing, then continue. The mais practice you have, the mais details you will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives you a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted over a year ago
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Your welcome :D
dreamfields posted over a year ago
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