do u like my story?

Since you are composição literária a story, you should probably use proper grammar, no?

But I'm not too sure whether your book revolves around the romance between this main character or whether it's mais about her trying to survive. Either way, I don't really like romance and this story is quite overdone. Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean here, it's just my opinion. Please don't take it personally.

It does sound interesting. Hopefully if you plan on posting it here you won't use that type of grammar, because although some (like me) make an effort to try to understand as we read it, others will simply cadela, puta about it (No offense to those who will). So just a suggestion: Type it in great grammar for all to read and enjoy. :)

And again, it sounds interesting. Don't know enough to like or dislike, but it grasped my attention. Good job for doing that because I don't like romance that much xD