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is this any good?

you asked me if i'd cry
if you ever said goodbye

you asked me if i'd lie
just to keep you por my side

i asked you what you meant
por saying goodbye and telling a olie

you told me you were leaving
so you could have a better looking girl to carry por your side

so, now you're all alone
while i've gone and found someone new

that girl never truely loved you

and these are the things you put me through

i though i was alone
never to find my way back home

but now i'm happy as can be
gone and found someone new

and i've already forgotten about you
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thanks guys!! it means a lot that you took ur time to read this!!
emmyliz13 posted over a year ago
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fallingmelody said:
I thought it was good. You described your story well thruogh your poetry. I likes it!! >-<
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manjusang said:
deep hearted,,,i like it
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CMJCMJLG said:
Wow that's amazing. So deep and powerful, you are a very good writer.
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