Percy Jackson Series Article: a percy jackson story....HELP ME NAME IT!

a percy jackson story....HELP ME NAME IT!

posted by llrulez

Chapter #1-My Life Goes "BANG"!!!

TRIIIIIIIING!!
That was the last time i was going to hear the school bell,well, at least for a few months.
I walked out my last class, hoping i would never walk in there again!!ive had some bad experiences in there,really!!being dyslexic and having ADHD isn’t a walk in the park!!
i forgot to introduce my self.im haylie worth and im 15.ive got brown hair and light blue eyes.th eonly thing im good at is art.i amor drawing an di never leave anywhere without my sketchbook!!

Anyway....The seguinte Morning..
KNOCK KNOCK.
my dad opened the door.
"wake up!you do remember that you are staying with you uncle for the summer?!"
"urgh...yea i remember...!ill come down soon!"
"make it,quick haylie.you've got half an hour!!"

i never really liked my father much,mostly because he wont tell me anything about my mother.he says that he doesn't know anything but i suspect he knows a lot mais than what hes telling me!!
i quickly freshened up,got dressed and went down for breakfast.
"tell me again why Judith has to come??"i asked my dad while eating toast
"because she is your uncles daughter!!also known as you cousin..!!"
"yeah whatever..."
Judith was my freaky and extremely stylish cousin
.i couldn't believe i have to ruin a whole summer por staying with her!

i heard a honk from outside and ran to the window.
"that must be your uncle!"
"then i gotta go!"i said grabbing my bag.i didn't even bother to look back.

i got a shock of perfume as soon as i entered the car.
"WHAT THE.....???Why did you do that??"i yelled
"oh sorry i didnt see you there!i thought you were just an ugly bird!!"she replied sweetly with a smirk.
snob....i though....what a bid show off!!
"settle down back there",my uncle said from the drivers seat.
"whatever happens it her fault daddy..."
"yes sweetykins i believe you....!!"
she giggled like a little girl
stupid judith...stupid..ignorant judith...i thought

after a while i feel asleep.
then the dream came...
i was standing in a room with humongous chairs and a ginormous lit up hearth in the center.there were three other people besides me.two boys and one girl.all of them looked about the age of 16 or 17.the girl had blonde hair and intelligent grey eyes.one guy had amazing green eyes and black messy hair.the other had sandy-blonde hair and looked really really tired.they were all wearing Armour.i figured that they were fighting each other.the blonde and the green eyed guy were on one side against the other one.

then the image faded and disappeared.

i woke up with a gasp
"what?a fly stuck in your throat??"said judith
my anger rose.i couldn't tolerate any mais of Judith's nonsense!!!i felt like smacking her and i would of done so but all of a sudden the car jerked to a stop.we were stranded in the middle of nowhere.just trees,trees and mais trees!
"what happened?"i asked my uncle
"i think i heard something-"
before he could say another word an Arqueiro came straight through the window and hit him.he immediately fainted.i thought he was dead!i heard a scream,it came from judith ,next to me.
"why'd you scream??your not the one hit por an arrow!!!!"
"yea but hes my dad!!!"
and she screamed again.more high pitched this time.
"STOP PANICKING"i yelled at her
"IM NOT PANICKING !!"
"YEAH YOU ARE.SCREAMING IS NOT GOING TO MAKE THIS SITUATION ANY BETTER!!"
"STOP YELLING AT ME !!"she said and then she fainted.i guess all this was too much for her ervilha sized brain to handle.
so im trapped in a car,i dont know how to drive,my uncles dead and my cousins unconscious.yup...i thought...nothing could get worse than this..!!!
i looked around for a solution but a girl,about 17,took me por surprise.she pushed my uncle to the passengers seat,got into the car and started driving ,all in less than a minute.
"hey!what do you think your doing??"i yelled
"saving your life!"she turned around to look to me and i gasped.she was the same girl from my dream only older.

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llrulez i know its all messed up...... its my first time writing........... but the story is going to be worth reading i promise!!!!!!

silverstream101 its good

llrulez thanks..........

lovespercy O GOODNESS!! I LOVE IT. it is annabeth i know it!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love annabeth. haylee- that's my name! except spelt differently! that is beyond ironic. keep it up i really want to find out what happens next. good job and keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!

llrulez thanks a lot lovespercy (or should i say haylee???) i dont no if ironic is somthing good or bad but anyway.........ill post soon.......

lovespercy good! let me know! oh ironic is a happy thing- i feel like I was named after the character or the character was named after ME- wait maybe it is me!!!!! Maybe I am a demigod!!!

llrulez lol........maybe you might be a demigod....and if u r then consider me being jealous!!!!1jk jk.... i couldnt post because of school!!!!but my friend(who wrote the story with me)might post.......

artemis9917 hey!!!im d frend who llrulz spoke about!!! d 2 chapta will b posted 2morow!!!!

llrulez omg when will u post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lovespercy ummmmm. hello?! ARE YOU GOING TO POST?!!!!!!!!!!

lovespercy I have a suggestion. If you want more people to read it, put this on the Heroes of Olympus or a Percy Jackson club that has more fans. The more fans there are in the club, the more people are likely to read it. And put it in forums, those are also more popular.

llrulez ok ill try that........thanks i cant post because of school!!!too much homework.i hate school!!!! im sorry!!!

lovespercy oo sad. yeah life is so busy. do what you can do.

llrulez im really really sorry.......

llrulez ok here goes.....hope ya like it! Chapter #2-Camp Half-Blood,Here I Come... the girl drove fast through the trees.where was she taking me?..i thought.i had no idea what to do.its not everyday a girl shoots your uncle,gets into your car and drives you away to god knows where?!? "who are you?"i asked nervously "im annabeth and you must be-" "what are you doing here?" "i thought your name was haylie" "it is and im serious!why did you kill my uncle??",i was getting really angry. she was silent for a while as drove through a narrow path,further into the forest. "i didnt kill him,hes just asleep and besides im not a killer except when it comes to monsters because-"she would of gone on but suddenly Judith woke up. "Ahhhhh!shes in the car!anyone HELP!"she shrieked louder than ever,her fists banging on the window."theres a hobo in my car!!!" "Hobo?"me and annabeth asked together.Judith looked at the girl in the drivers seat and fainted again. "pathetic!!"i muttered under my breath. "why did u put him to sleep?"i got back to questioning annabeth. "because i came here to recruite you" "recruite me wha?am i some kind of fugitive?" "no,not a fugitive.im here to take you to camp half-blood" "Camp wha-what?" "Camp half-blood.havent you heard about greek gods and mortals having children which are half-god and half-human.they are known as-" "Demigods?!?",i exclaimed in disbelief. "exactly!by now you must of figured that you are a demigod" "i am??",now i was starting to think this was a dream. "yes" "but what does that have to do with my dead.....i meant asleep uncle?" "well..he wasn't going to let you go away that easily especially for his little sweetykins!!" i was still trying to make sense of all of this and before i could say anything else,the car skidded to a stop. "we're here!"annabeth smiled.again we were surrounded by trees and more trees. "where exactly is here??"i asked as i got out of the car annabeth sighed,"just help me lift Ms.Faint-A-Lot" "wha?you mean judith?" "yes!her!!" i grunted and helped annabeth lift judith.out of everyone in the entire world i get stuck with Judith!! "ok.lets go!",i struggled under judith's weight.she might look like a size 0 but she a lot heavier than that!! we walked for about 10 minutes and soon we reached a clearing.i looked up and saw a huge arch.there was something written on it.i wondered what language it was. "ancient Greek",annabeth seemed to read my thoughts. i looked at it again and the words slowly started to re-arrange themselves to form the words.. "camp Half-Blood"i wispered

lovespercy goood!!!! are you going to post?! cause i really like it. is judith a demigod too? I wonder who Haylie's parent is? i bet judith's is aphrodite.

llrulez ill poat asap!!!

lovespercy YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

llrulez okay here u go... this is a really long one!! enjoy! and guess what?percy is back! chapter#3-im a demigod..yay!(not) camp half-blood was no ordinary sight. in fact it was extremely huge.annabeth explained to me the entire architecture of the big house as we walked there. we put judith down on the stairs and went inside.lets me tell you this wasn't something you see everyday.there was a middle aged man sitting on a wheel chair,playing poker with another man who had a permanent scowl on his face.maybe he was cursed or something,i thought.the weirdest part was that they were playing on a table tennis board.the wheel chair man who was handing out some cards, was wearing a black t-shirt with 'ParTie PonIes: We Party All Night' imprinted on it.it was odd for him to wear something like that,especially for his age and his condition(wheel chair).the other man was very fat and was strangely smelling like wine.he must of been a very jolly person in his previous life because now he looked liked some one who was recently sent to jail for eternity.it was then that i realized he was staring at me with a piercing glare.if looks could kill i would be dead right now.i immediately looked away. "what are doing here annie-bess grace?"he said looking at annabeth now."or is it bethy-ann lace?"she looked like she was going to jump on him and strangle him till he gets her name right.but for some reason she held back.then it hit me.this is no ordinary man.it was the god of wine himself, Dionysus.that would figure the air smelling of grape. "two more demigods chiron."annabeth said ignoring the god.which i didn't think was a wise thing to do. "thank you annabeth you may leave."the wheel chair man seemed to notice us now."i'd like to have a private word with haylie"he said. how did he know my name?i thought.he might have some kind of mind reading or information finding power.in that case he would be a human Wikipedia.weird.i knocked that thought off my head. "have a seat he said."he said pointing to the chair beside him. "would you like to introduce yourself."he asked once i sat,but i didn't hear him.i was too busy staring at dionysus.i felt that if i took my eyes off him for even a second,he might blast me in to smithereens.chiron, or W C G (wheel chair guy) as i like to call him,looked at the god as if to say "get out of here!your scaring the poor kid!"."humph"dionysus said as he clicked his fingers and disappeared. "i am chiron,the activities director of this camp."WCG looked at me.he saw me looking at his wheel chair.i was more interested in what happened there but i knew better than to ask."this is a disguise.i am actually a centaur."that got my attention. "you mean those things with human body and horse legs?"i asked stupidly. "yea.exactly."he said calmly. "but then..why aren't you..-" "i prefer you to see me in my human form for the first time.i just wanted to say welcome and beware because being a demigod had its disadvantages."i wondered what they were."anyway id show you around my self but ive got a lot of planing to do.why dont you go find percy ?he'll be glad to help."chiron continued. "okay"i said"thanks"i got up and head straight for the door but i stopped, turned around and said"where will i find percy?"i asked. "he most probably would be in the Poseidon cabin." "aand.. where is that?" "its the cabin with sea shells all over it and it will smell like sea water." i took one step towards the door but turned around again. "um chiron?" "yes my child?" "how does salt water smell like?"he glared at me."ok gotta go!"i spun on my heels and left.it took a while to find the poseidon cabin.it took even longer to find all the cabins itself.

lovespercy WHAT?! YOU STOP THERE?!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE PERCY IS ALMOST HERE!!!! WHY WHY WHY WHYWHYWHY ? FINISH! RECRUIT MORE PEOPLE TO READ THIS CAUSE I DON'T WANT TO BE THE ONLY ONE READING THIS! THIS IS COOL. one comment- try to work a little bit on sentance structure. a comment starts on a new line Example: "Haylee, you are so cool," said Percy. "So are you, Percy, you are epic," I retorted back. "Blalalalalalalla," Percy snorted. He looked like a pig when he laughed. It was really cute, he also reminded me of Taylor Lautner when he smiled, except 20 times cuter. "What? ballet? or are you immitating grover?" kinda like that. capitolize words at begining of sentances.\ LOVE IT

llrulez thanks ill keep that in mind but in too lazy to capitalize the words!!!

hotfudgebrownie Continue this story and the interview with the stolls along with the read the story if u can cuz this is amazing dude!!!!