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I'm just going to say this to warn you guys. Some contents aren't for people under 12 years old. So don't give me bad comments saying that this is gross or whatever. Ok? If you don't want to read it, I'm going to put the summary of the chapter in the bottom of the page. Alright then :)

rd person's POV


"I died on my 21 st birthday." Bella repeated.

"How?" Edward whispered.

Bella looked at the Cullens with a sorrowful expression on her face. "To put it short, I pretty much died the way Rosalie did."

Rosalie gasped along with the rest of the Cullens.

"Victoria went out to town to go hunting, and left me alone in the house, in the basement." She started.

"I broke the basement window in order to escape. There was no one guarding the house, so I was safe. I was free. I went to town to look for somewhere to stay, without trying to confront Victoria. Though, I was very desperate for something to eat and drink. I was stupid enough to follow the man, Mr. Kelli into the field. He told me he would take care of me, and keep me alive. I was grateful for him. I'm still surprised that I fell for that nonsense. There was a door in the ground, a little hideout to sneak into.

(A/N: If you read or saw the Lovely Bones, yes, it's the way how Susie died, and this should make sense to you then. If you didn't, I hope I described it well enough) He told me that it was a great place to stay in. There was a fridge for comida and drinks. I was full of gratitude for him. After a few moments I realized that something was off. I felt a little uneasy being in Mr. Kelli's presence. I told him that I needed to leave."

(A/N: If you are sensitive to this type of violence, I recommend leitura after the page break, and skip this part.)

"I went up the ladder, but Mr. Kelli pulled me off por grabbing one of my legs. He took me off the ladder and began to taunt me and take off my clothes. I didn't listen and he ripped them off himself. I screamed for him to stop and let me go. He didn't comply. He just kept on torturing me. He scrapped me, causing me to bleed. I kept on yelling begging for mercy. After that, I was….. Dead." Bella whispered the last statement.

The Cullens stand there stunned, at Bella's proclamation.

"What does it feel like, to die?" Rosalie whispered.

"Honestly, very pleasant, but once your spirit is out of your body, you feel very light, as if you could fly around. The moment I felt myself drifting away, I saw my body, which freaked me out a lot. I started yelling for help, but then I realized that no one could help me."

"What happened next?" Edward asked. He didn't want to know, he didn't want to know what his amor had went through, but it was out of necessity. He wished for Bella to return.

"I was dead." Bella said in a "duh" tone.

"We know that. But he meant as if why you are still here? Aren't you supposed to be in Heaven or whatever there is in the afterlife? Is there even an afterlife?" Carlisle asked. He was always wondering what there was in the land after you died.

Bella looked on the ground, trying to think on what to say to the Cullens. She knew what happened of course, but she wondered if the Cullens would think of her differently.

"I- I have many issues when it came to the afterlife. I have spoken The Creator Himself. He told me I wasn't supposed to die then. I didn't enter Heaven or Hell. The Creator said I have some "unfinished business" to attend to. He told me to stay in this house and stay. I was frustrated of course. I didn't understand what there was to do here if you guys already left. Though, the Creator begs to differ. I stayed in this house since then. I grew very frustrated and angry for Him to leave me down here. I grew angry enough to haunt this house with the Ouija Board to get some entertainment. I became out of control, and began to kill." Bella took a breath and continued. "I know that most of you are worried of being a monster. But here's news for you, you are only a monster, if you enjoy other people's suffering and torture, and that's was I became."

"But-"Alice was about to interrupt her, but Bella expected that to happen. Bella made a gesture that told Alice to not talk.

"Please don't interrupt; it's hard enough for me to tell you all of this." Bella whispered. Alice nodded and had an apologetic expression on her face.

"Edward." Bella said. Edward stood up suddenly and his attention turned directly to see Bella's face. It made Edward's coração quench in pain. It was full of sorrow and regret, along with regret.

"I believe you researched about the killing that occurred here a couple years atrás correct?" Bella asked. Edward nodded.

"I was the cause of that. Though, particularly it wasn't for the reason you think." Bella explained. "The Conrad family are related to my murderer, which set me off right and then. I didn't care that they didn't know about what Mr. Kelli have done. Though after they were murdered, I began to think about the matters and the consequences of my actions. I begged The Creator for forgiveness "Bella made a weak smile. "I repented and continued to live and wait patiently. After a couple of years of waiting and meditating, you came along, and here we are."


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Emmett blinked.

"So what happened? What happened to your parents? Where's your body?" Emmett began to ramble many questions.

Rosalie wacked him on the back of the head. "Don't you think that sounds a little insensitive?"

"Sorry." Emmett muttered.

Bella made a small laugh, which made Edward turn his full attention to Bella once again. He missed hearing his Bella's sweet laugh.

Bella looked at Emmett with a sad expression.

"My parents are still living; Charlie is still in Forks, though he is not as cheery as before. He grieved for my loss, along with Renee but she has Phil." Bella said. "Though, my body… It was thrown into a river. My murder did anything to avoid getting caught. He cleaned all of my blood, and kept that place in the hole hidden. I still don't understand something though." Bella whispered.

"What?" Alice eyes widened seeing what Bella was about to say.

"I don't think my murder is human. The field I was killed underground is in Forks, where you guys played baseball. It was the exact location where we saw James, Laurent, and Victoria. " Bella whispered.

Summary:Bella finally told the Cullens how she died. She escaped the house after Victoria went hunting. She was stupid enough to follow a man, who offered her a place to stay. The man was named Mr. Kelli. He brought Bella to a clearing and there was a room underground, and did some VERY bad things and killed her. Though, Bella admitted the confusing part was that the clearing that she was killed in is in Forks. She is wondering if her murder is human.

I know, I'm using some ideas from the Movie The Lovely Bones. No need to tell me
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Alright, there you guys have it.


All of your stories are AMAZING! And as I said before, you should continue the stories. As a judge, I can't be going personal and make my BFFs have the highest points. So these are the results of the topo, início three winners.

Third place cici1264's story Bella's Secret Sister

Second Place Nikkytwilight12's story Renesmee Life

FIRST PLACE _madz_'s story!!!!


All of those who have participated will get a letter of appreciation for EVEN making this contest even happen

I have to thank all of the judges who gave pointers, and gave the final results.

Thanks to the judges:
ashesandwine...
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Alright! Thanks to everyone who have participated in the contest.

This icludes:

nikkytwilight12

_madz_

cici1264

SMackedlove

sami1002


Thanks to you guys! And ALL of your stories are amazing, and I encourage you to continue them. You are now allowed to post your OWN stories on my spot if you wish. I know that I didn't allow you guys to do that before, but I have a change of heart, and because of the fact I have school and my stories are pretty much delayed from time to time.


Winners will be posted later today.
Thanks.

-patrisha727 & judges
well here we go, it's not really anything but a small one shot, just because i was bored.
hope you like it anyway :)


Bella’s POV

I was staring through the window into the night, and it was raining. The fine water droplets
glistened in the frigid air, a sign of how cold it really was outside. The light from the house
spilled out into the night, bathing the surrounding forest. The foliage pressed together, giving
the impression of an impenetrable mural of green, almost claustrophobic. It was beautiful, but
it wasn’t home.
I shook my head, trying desperately to rid my mind of these recurring thoughts....
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 Renesmee ( Taylor )
Renesmee ( Taylor )
Nessie comes back from the future and pretends to be Bella's sister. But she can't tell anyone that she is from the future, and that she is Bella's and Edward's daughter. But it will be hard because Edward can read her mind and find out who she is. Alice can't see her and might think that Nessie is a werewolf. And Nessie also looks like Bella and Edward and that might give the secret away. Jacob might see her and imprint on her. And she acts like a vampire.

"Taylor come on hurry up we are going to be late for school!" mom shouted while I was sneaking back into my window after a full night...
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this is one of mine ive all ready posted it on a nother place.





More Then One!

Bella pov.
I sat there in the moonlight half bored out of my mined. Edward was out hunting with Jasper, Esme and Carlisle , Alice was shopping online, Renesmee was out with Jacob, ( I still cant believe she is 16 in one year.) and who knows what Rosalie and Emmett are doing. So I sit hear looking at the stars. Ever since the Volturi had come almost a ano a go Jacob stays at the house unless I though him out it makes him mad but he would not dare mess with me. Haha. Well were going to have to mover soon, but of course...
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Alright, it's already the 20th in some places around the world, so stories can be posted right now!

So... just post the artigos on this spot, and judges will be comind soon for the judging.

Ok, for you guys information, the prizes:
3rd: 25 medals

2nd: 50 medals and may make a story out of your idea

1st: Your story will be entered to a "one shot" contest on fanfiction.net and see if you win an award and 100 medals (and maybe even a picture of what patrisha727 ACTUALLY looks like in real life *seriously don't ask, many are asking what I actually look like*

Extra Creativity Award: You will get a sneak peak of a story I'm currently thinking about (and no, I can't tell you how you earn it)

So there you have it guys! POST YOUR STORIES NOW!
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Song used in Incarnate
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Song used in Incarnate
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In the mood people.... gonna write. ^_^


Bella's POV


As we got out of the limo, we were greated por thousands of fãs and cameras. We ran inside the arena and got ready in our dressing rooms. Marianna is the keyboard, Elizabeth does the drums, Gallia does the guitar, and Rebecca is my backround singer. As you would guess, I'm the main singer.

We got out onto the stage and spoke to the fans.
Ok, they are actually speaking Italian, but for translations issues, let's just stick with English.

"Hey everyone!" I yelled into the microphone.
Everyone screamed in excitement and happiness. I smiled.
"So for...
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Surpise! Thanks patrisha727for your wonderful stoires, heres somecomments from fans.
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Patrisha (Carol:P) your stories are the best and so are you:) You are an important part of fanpop and that's why we are making this and you and just_bella have a spot in your honour! I'm sending all my love, kisses and hugs to you:) Keep going....
Ashesandwine:)

you Rock. heehee and all your storys have been AWSOME! all smiles :)
princesspinkla


Patrisha727 you are one of the best authors there are here in fanpop.Thanks for all these amazing stories, I honestly...
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PLZ let this one stay up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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amor the song :)
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kiss the girl
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I amor the song and the música video ^_^
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oi you guys, once I told you guys before, I'm sorry for not composição literária as often as I used to. Because of school, and for the fact that I'm sick right now.... I'm not sure when it's the seguinte time I'll be writing. But I know for sure I'm NOT going to stop composição literária permanently. But for those who really likes fanfictions, I'll be posting some stories on the links section of this spot.

For those who have been curious where I get ideas for stories, (Seriously, for those are brain-busted for the story contest should check these out for ideas) I get them from fanfiction.net.

*laughs* I problably told A LOT of you guys in chat about this too. Trust me, I'll be posting some of the stories I've been reading, (and gets hooked on them) here when I'm not actually writting. These should keep you REALLY busy, and I know that they are better than all of the stories I made COMBINED.

Have fun reading! I'll still be posting my stories too.
Have an awesome labor dia weekend! ^_^
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oi you guys, it's finally Friday! So now here's the seguinte chapter of the new story, Incarnate.

Edward's POV


Edward Alice. I didn't turn around. I just stared at the ground in the meadow with a blank expression.
You can't just stand here. It will cause too much pain.
I took a deep ragged breath. What can I do now? My life, meaning, amor is gone. She won't come back. I know that an angel like her would be in Heaven, where she belongs. But I still can't imagine a life without her, it hurts too much to think about it.

I will never crititize Romeo ever again. I need to be with her.
Then I heard a mongrel...
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WOW! It's been awhile since I have written Amore. Sorry! I always get side tracked, and school is interfering. So here's the seguinte chapter :)


When I woke up, I didn't see myself inside the car anymore, we were back in Alice's and my dorm.
"I knew you would wake up." Alice said while a smile.
Once I cleared my mind up again, I recalled what just happened.
"So Jacob is really... a werewolf?" I nearly shreiked.
"Yes. He's a werewolf for awhile actually. He first phased when he was about 13 years old. Pretty young, I say."
I blinked.
"So wierd, I thought I was just friends with humans just a week ago,...
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I'm the freak, I got another idea for a story. But this time, I thought through the whole story line (unlike Switched, which is why I didn't write it for so long, sorry). Please comment and please tell me if you like it. If you do, I'll continue it :)


I sat in the airplane seat, too anxious and worried.
"You need to calm down." Alice said. "The plane won't get any faster, Edward!"
I couldn't help it, the plane ride is getting me nervous. I drummed my fingers on the sides of the seats.
"I can't help but worry, Alice. I would rather jump out this plane and run to Forks instead."
"Well, a plane is...
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