patrisha727 Article: Story Contest FINAL results.....

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posted by patrisha727

Alright, there you guys have it.

All of your stories are AMAZING! And as I said before, you should continue the stories. As a judge, I can't be going personal and make my BFFs have the highest points. So these are the results of the topo, início three winners.

Third place cici1264's story Bella's Secret Sister

Second Place Nikkytwilight12's story Renesmee Life

FIRST PLACE _madz_'s story!!!!

All of those who have participated will get a letter of appreciation for EVEN making this contest even happen

I have to thank all of the judges who gave pointers, and gave the final results.

Thanks to the judges:
ashesandwine
just_bella
*sigh* Emmett4ever didn't make it for the contest so she didn't get to judge, now I feel guilty....

Thanks to all of the participants, and your prizes will be coming soon.

And for you _madz_ I'll be posting your story on fanfiction.net for your prize and enter it to a one shot contest. Thanks sooo much and congrat.

Have a jolly g'day.

Caroline Patricia L.
patrisha727

_Kristina_, Queen_Renesmee and 8 others like this

jacobblackfan23 Cool thanks:)

Sacred_Love1550 Cool! Congrats _madz_!! And everyone else's stories were really good too!

princesspinkla YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go _madz_!!!!!!!!!! U ROCKED and go everyone else 2

Edward_Bella234 Congrats _madz_ and the other top placers.

Rob_patt_fan congrats to everyone

_madz_ WOW!! i actually, [i]really[/i] was not expecting this!!!! i was away, so i only just saw this! thank you!! i'm just glad i was able to share this with everyone, i hope you liked it :) now i have to see if i can make this into a full length story...

ashesandwine Congrats _madz_!!!! Your story truly was AWESOME!!!

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy part 30

posted by patrisha727

Last one for today. But change of plans, I will write maybe 1 or 2 parts tommorow since I'm leaving at NIGHT.

Bella's POV

I took the torch, looking at it. It looked like Egyptian writting. I didn't learn any Eygptian at all so I couldn't understand even one word of this.

I was alone, and I kept my mind open for Edward to see the writting. I also tried to translate it, but I can't do that unlesss I know some of that language, I hate that rule.

"I can somewhat understand it." I heard Edward say.
" Really?" I called out.
" Yeah, um here's an idea, don't ask where I got it from but take one of the...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy part 29

posted by patrisha727

My seguinte article, part 30, will be posted about 3-5 hours because I'm going to have to pack and get ready to leave for tommorow. Part 30 is the perfect place to stop for the seguinte two weeks. But, don't worry, the story doesn't end YET!

Bella's POV

I went down the steps, looking around cautiously. Then Edward said, "We can't go down."
"Why? I asked.
" I don't know, it's like there's an invisible mural on the entrance. There's also a writting on the floor seguinte to it." he said.
" Well, what does it say?" I called from the bottom of the steps.
" I can't read it, it's from a different language." he...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy part 28

posted by patrisha727

Starting tommorow, there will be NO artigos being posted until July 5.If you want to know mais why, go to the forums. Yes, I'm VERY sad that I can't write mais for you guys. But I'll write the seguinte few parts on paper and start working on the 3rd book. But PLEASE DON'T FORGET ABOUT ME!!! I'll be back soon. But today, I'll post up articles. ^_^

Bella's POV

What's this? The stone has a long paragraph of writting in a language that the devil used. I stared at it and once I finished, my eyes were wide.
Edward and Renesmee was right behind me then.
"What's going on Bella? What did you find?" Edward...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy part 27

posted by patrisha727

Alright guys, this is the last one for today. I'll be watching some Harry Potter filmes afterwards. ^_^

Edward's POV

"What do you mean por 'I think it's too late for that.' ?" I whispered while taking a step progressivo, para a frente towards Bella.
Bella put her hand between me and her.
"Don't come any closer to me." she hissed.
Shocked went across my face. Is Bella evil again?
Her face was covered por her long, dark, thick hair so I couldn't see the expression on her face. por the way she's talking, I think she's grimacing.

"Bella?" I whispered.
She didn't answer. She opened her mind on purpose this time, to show...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy part 25

posted by patrisha727

seguinte one will be up in a few hours. ^_^

Bella's POV

Surounded por the deaths of evil, I feel my body getting infuenced por it. I knew then, that my brain disconnected from my body and I couldn't think properly. This place, Hell, is too much for me. The evil here, is clouding my goodness in my heart. I don't know, but I feel 100 time mais powerful than usual. Then I saw the Devil, he crowned me as the wife of Satan, I didn't want to do it, but in the evil ways, it sounded like a good thing. Once he crowned me, I grinned. Then the devil spoke a language, that I know understand, telling me to...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 22

posted by patrisha727

seguinte one will be up in a few hours. ^_^

Bella's POV

I saw Ekanga heading outside.... exactly following my trap.
"What are you doing?" he asked Edward.
I stepped in front of Ekanga, him not knowing that I was there. Then I let myself become visible again. Ekanga flinched.
"So, do you actually want me to hurt you or not?" I asked.
" You are supposed to." he said.
I grinned. I took a fistful of flames from the fogo and threw it at him. It hit one of his arms and it was burned.
" Do you want more?" I asked.
" I have to know how strong you can be without most of your powers." he said while craddling...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 21

posted by patrisha727

Last one for today!

Bella's POV

"What's the segundo task?" I asked.
" The segundo task is to fight against your own powers." Ekanga said.
I was confused. How do I fight against my own powers? Ekanga saw my confused expressions.
" I'm also an Immortal. I have the power to temporarily borrow other vampires' powers. It's like transfering energy to others. I can't keep the power for too long. I will have to transfer it back to the original owner." he said.
I was shocked. He's an Immortal? He doesn't look like one.

"Give me your hand." he said.
I gave him my hand, and he took it. I felt like I was getting...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 20

posted by patrisha727

The seguinte one will be in a couple of hours.^_^

Bella's POV

I turned around to see what Renesmee was talking about. Then I saw another ghost.... The ghost of Charlie? My eyes were wide. I took a few steps back, with shock. Edward looked confused.
"Why are you scared? That's just another ghost!" I heard Edward say.

"Charlie....." I whispered.
" Bella, you never told me you were a vampire why did you keep this away from me? Why? Why did you keep this away from me all of these years? Why did you do this to me? " the ghost said and it disapeared.
"WAIT! CHARLIE! DON'T LEAVE!!!!" I screamed. But it...

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Supermassive Black Hole-Muse-Twilight Official Soundtrack

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In the Baseball Scene in the Twilight Movie. ^_^

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Fairytale - Alexander Rybak

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The winner of the Eurovision Song Contest 2009. I'M IN amor WITH THIS SONG!

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 19

posted by patrisha727

Here's Another one

Bella's POV

Before my HUGE air current could reach him, I clenched my hand into a fist and the air is back to normal. My eyes were wide.
"Edward...." I whispered.

"Who?" Ekanga asked.
I didn't answer him. I was still staring at Edward with shock.
" WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE!?!?!?!" I screamed.
Edward flinched. " I came to help you, love."
"Ekanga said I have to do these tasks, alone." I said.
"Well, I came here because I want you to be safe." he said to me. "I was the one who found your necklace. I gave it to Nessie to give it to you."
I glared at Renesmee. Renesmee nodded....

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 18

posted by patrisha727

Here's the seguinte one! ^_^

Bella's POV

When I got on topo, início of the steps I saw a man, that looks similar to Abhay. Maybe he's another member of the Sijuni Tribe. I'm not completely sure though.The man walked towards me.

"My name is Ekanga, I am the gardian of the Chosen One." he said while kneeling besides me. "I've been waiting her for years for the arrival of the Chosen One." he said.

"I think I am the chosen one. A Sijuni Tribe Leader named Abhay said I am por what's carved on my hand and the new inscription on the necklace." I said.

" Ah yes, Abhay. A dear friend of mine. May I see your hand?"...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 17

posted by patrisha727

I'm not sure how many I'll put up, I'm losing ideas.... I can't THINK! ^_^

Edward's POV

I jumped out the window myself, to follow the footprints. I put Bella's wedding ring and her colar in my pocket. The footprints lead to the airport. I tried to call Bella, she didn't answer.

Then I got a call from Alice.
"Edward! I don't know how, but I saw Bella going Northumberland, UK. Then she headed towards the Chillingham castelo while holding Renesmee and the vision disapeared! I'm worried about Bella. There's also another problem, I saw a vision that Charlie passed away...." she said
Ok, first,...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 16

posted by patrisha727

Last one for today! This part might be a little lame... I'M HAVING WRITER'S BLOCK! ^_^

Renesmee's POV

Mom was holding my hand while we stepped inside. I was getting scared. The place was completely dark. This DOES look like a haunted castle....

Then I felt someone behind me and I screamed.
" Shhhh.... calm down. It's me, dad. I just came here because I needed to give your mom this. Don't tell her that I came until you two leave this place. I will be staying at the same hotel as you are, in room 395." Dad whispered while giving me mom's necklace. He kissed me on the forehead and left quickly...

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Chillingham castelo

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 15

posted by patrisha727

The seguinte one I'll put up will be in a few hours. Enjoy :D

Alice's POV

" One mais thing Bella, I don't know how to tell you this. I know that this is not the best time to say it, but your dad passed away." I told her. It was silent after a few minutes.
" Bella, are you there." I whispered.
" Charlie...." she whispered. " WHY DOES TERRIBLE THINGS HAPPEN TO ME!!!!!?!?!!?!?" she screamed.
Then the phone broke up.

I closed my eyes and shook my head slowly. I feel so sorry for Bella. Her father got killed, por something.... For Bella's sake, I'm going to find out who did this....

Bella's POV
"WHY...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 13

posted by patrisha727

Last one for today. ^_^

Edward's POV

"Bella is the chosen one." I explained.
Rosalie's eyes widened. "You are joking right?"
Jacob looked even mais confused. I explained the necklace, the new mark on her hand, Abhay, and the legend of the Sijuni tribe.
"Ok..... Bella is seriously busy." he said.
"Yes she is." I answered. "So where's Bella?" I asked. Renesmee was sobbing harder. I hated to see her in pain.

" She took off. She told me couldn't deal with it. She screamed outside and shot lightning like a maniac! She even threw her colar across the field. I don't know what's wrong with her!"...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 12

posted by patrisha727

Ok, I think we need mais of Nessie in the story ,so here's a start. This will problably the last one for today.

Nessie's POV

After seeing my mom leave again, I started to cry. I never liked being left behind.
" Nessie, please stop crying. I know that your mom will come back." Jacob told me.
I was still sobbing.
" Oh yeah, well, what happens if she doesn't come back?!?!" I challenged.
Jacob didn't answer. We headed inside the castle.

Then I saw my dad. "Jacob? Renesmee? Rosalie? what are you guys doing here? "
"We got bored so we decided to stop by." Aunt Rosalie said.
"Nessie why are you crying?"...

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The fantasia doesn't end, but time is our new enemy Part 11

posted by patrisha727

Bella's POV

Now I have to figure this out? I don't want this! I never wanted to be the chosen one!

I was about to go outside so I wouldn't break anything because of my anger over frustration, but Edward stopped me.
"Love, you know that you won't be alone. I got you into this mess, and now the best thing I could do is to help you get out of it."
I had to look down. I need time to think.
" Edward, I know you'll be at my side, but I need to be alone right now. I don't want to hurt anyone or anything inside."

I can tell someone told Edward to let me go and so Edward helped me go outside.
"I'll be...