breaking dawn part 1 tv spot

Continued from chapter "one mais nail, one mais coffin":

“Nessie don’t. Don’t you dare regret that kiss! I don’t. I never will.”
“But my dad took me away from you”
“I don’t care about that. Your kiss was the best experience of my life! “
“Really?”
“Ness…I’m in amor with you too. I always have been since the dia you were born. I been waiting for you my whole life. “
“How?”
“How what? How could I be in amor with you from birth?”
“Yes.”
“Well that’s kind of a long story actually.”
“I want to know.”
This was the one thing I figured I would never need...

lol i wrote this in about fifteeen minutos and then I couldn't stop. I loved the way the story was flowing so I kept writting. I now have 4 chapters this being the first, though i think i could tweak it a bit to make it better. Let me know please!

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[Chapter 1]

On the southern coast of the state of Texas there is a small town that is call the “beacon” of our wonderful state. This towns name is Port Isabel, and this town, indecently is where I grew up. My name is Lily Embers, and I used to hate this town I reside in. Oh how I resented living in this corner of the United States. It was...