Lily raised an eyebrow, "Are you saying I don't look good in my bikini?" James' eyes widened as though he'd offended her, "What? No! You look good! Amazing in fact... Gorgeous, really."
Following some shocking news, Lily shuts herself off for a while, unable to tell anyone whats happened. As frustration builds, she lashes out at James. Can she fix it before she loses him too?
This is an artigo I posted on the Severus Snape spot. I was wondering what you all thought of it. No flames, please! :) If you think I'm wrong, at least be nice about it, please.