How does it look?

it looks good for a begginner...

It looks quite good and neat. Really cool too. Keep up the good work with that drawing :)

It's very defined and your shapes are excellent.

What I would suggest is that you don't use such thick lines when sketching with pencil as it doesn't look as sharp and put together. If you want thick lines, thicken them when you use ink por using a pen that draws lines thicker. You should let your tools work for you instead of drawing over the same line again and again. When you sketch with pencil, the picture should look about as bare as it can be (for mangá drawing that is).

Overall, to me it looks like you're ready to start using mais than just pencil.

It looks cool but you should work on the eyes im a levi fã so thanx for drawing him my dia began so beautiful😝