angel Beats wallpaper

Ok, so here are 2 of my sketches. The one with the rosa, -de-rosa hair and green eyes is mistymaydawngo 's OC for angel Beats! : Kiley!
The segundo one is Zack Fair from FINAL fantasia VII: CRISIS CORE copyright SQUAR ENIX. Tell me what you think in the comments.

If you want you can ask me to draw your OC too but please provide a good descrição or just some crappy picture to give me a idea. See my other sketch in the artigo about Katsune Iyo.

Yes, Kiley and Katsune look alike because I used the same model character Tifa Lockhart as their pose thing and so they look similar but I hope its not that vast of a similarity. Oh yeah and heres a fun thing you can include in your comment:

Rate each pic (#1-Kiley or #2-Zack) from this scale::
1-Terrible
2- You could do better
3- Its a OK pic
4- Its awesome
5- Masterpiece

And be sure to point out anything I can work on. DO NOT WORRY ABOUT MY FEELINGS!!